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lille rettelse

22. oktober 2007 af Rikkes (Slettet)
hej, jeg vil høre om der er en gut der vil rette lidt grammatik, stavefejl i følgende tekst:


Caroline Wozniacki is one of Europe’s best tennis players. In an age of only 11, the Danish girl is dreaming of being one of the best tennis players in the world, and there is every reason to think so. “Her talent is unrivalled, and she has a change to wind Wimbledon,” says her coach Henrik Stein. Caroline travels a lot in the world, to take part in tournaments, but still she spent time with her friends.
Caroline’s talent is unrivalled, but at the same time her parents are concerned. Her mother Anna and her father Piotr are both former elite athletics. But still they fear that Caroline gets both physical and mentally injured. Young talents in Europe are connected physiotherapists, but not in Denmark. Team Denmark, do not help athletic under the age of 15. Piotr thinks Team Denmark should start helping athletic less than 15 years old, because Caroline needs professional help like other athletics.


det ville være en enorm hjælp

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Svar #1
22. oktober 2007 af TanteOda (Slettet)

Damn, jeg er ikke en gut, så kan jeg hjælpe. ;-)

TanteOda

Svar #2
22. oktober 2007 af Rikkes (Slettet)

hehe, det ville være så dejligt med rettelse ! :S

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Svar #3
22. oktober 2007 af TanteOda (Slettet)

Nå, nu faldt det jo rigtig nok til jorden, når jeg mangler at skrive et ord. Så kan jeg lære det!

"In an age of only 11" - At an age

"the Danish girl is dreaming of being one" - .. dreams..

"..and she has a change to wind Wimbledon"? - a change? det forstår TanteOda altså ikke!

"but still she spent time with her friends." - spends

"Young talents in Europe are connected physiotherapists" - der mangler et ord

"do not help athletic under the age of 15" - athletic skal stå i flertal

Very nicely done
TanteOda

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Svar #4
22. oktober 2007 af TanteOda (Slettet)

"..and she has a change to wind Wimbledon" - hov, den overgik lige vindpustet fra min store hjerne.. wind? Du mener win, ikk?

Svar #5
22. oktober 2007 af Rikkes (Slettet)

.. nåå jo, jo det gjorde jeg! tusind tak oda;)

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