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Lille opgave...

06. november 2007 af Anderson89 (Slettet)
Dette er et lille resume til "A Trip to Grand Rapids" , jeg er meget i tvivl, og håber på lidt mere kompetent hjælp end den jeg selv kan få frem..

Ville bare vide om der er nogen umiddelbare fejl i følgende..


Roger Hedlund is living with his wife and his two teenage daughters on a farm in Lake Wobegon. It’s raining and Roger fears that the weather conditions won’t allow him to plant this year’s corn. His wife Cindy is irritated of Rogers’s restlessness and she suggests that they take a trip to Grand Rapids. Roger is not very found of the idea of letting his 2 teenage daughters alone on the farm but after a lot of discussion, Roger accepts his wife’s idea. On their way to Grand Rapids, Roger regrets his decision, he turns the car around and heads back. When Roger and his wife approach the Farm they realize that their daughters are having a party. Roger is at first very upset about it but after he gets some flashbacks to his own youth he decides to let it pass and go back to Grand Rapids.

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07. november 2007 af TanteOda (Slettet)

Roger is not very found.. du mener vel "fond". Found betyder fundet.

2 teenage.. tal skal skrives ud, derfor bliver 2 til two

but after a lot of discussion... ville bruge et andet ord for "a lot"

the Farm... hvorfor står Farm med stort?

(,) but after he gets some flashbacks to his own youth... en halvdårlig formulering




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