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I need for your help
04. december 2007 af
Lin@_ (Slettet)
Hej, det vil være en stor hjælp, hvis I læste det nedenstående igennem,og evt. rettede for fejl.Håber I vil hjælpe mig. På forhånd mange tak.
Summery of Billie Holiday’s film and text
Billie Holiday was born Eleanora Fagan on April 7, 1915, in Baltimore. She grew up in the poor part of Baltimore. Her parents were just a couple of kids, when they got Billie, her mother were only age of thirteen and her father were fifteen. We doesn’t knew much about her father , her parents got divorced. Her mother worked hard to earn money in order to survive and take care of her family.
Because of some reason Billie Holiday moved to New York with her mother. After a couple time been in New York she began signing in a local clubs and renamed herself Billie, because she didn’t like her name Eleanora. The audience like the new jazz singer, also Mc he was fascinate of the wonderful voice. Billie Holiday and Mc relationship got started there.
After she got a special offer, that is a tour whit a white orchestra. Billie Holiday was the first black women who work with a white orchestra; it was an arrangement that went against the temper of the times. During this tour she had problems with drugs and alcohol and was arrested several times on narcotics-related charges. She died in New York City in hospital on July 17, 1959, from alcohol- and drug-related complications.
Billie Holiday wasn’t against the white people, she worked whit them and actually educated a good relationship whit them.
Summery of Billie Holiday’s film and text
Billie Holiday was born Eleanora Fagan on April 7, 1915, in Baltimore. She grew up in the poor part of Baltimore. Her parents were just a couple of kids, when they got Billie, her mother were only age of thirteen and her father were fifteen. We doesn’t knew much about her father , her parents got divorced. Her mother worked hard to earn money in order to survive and take care of her family.
Because of some reason Billie Holiday moved to New York with her mother. After a couple time been in New York she began signing in a local clubs and renamed herself Billie, because she didn’t like her name Eleanora. The audience like the new jazz singer, also Mc he was fascinate of the wonderful voice. Billie Holiday and Mc relationship got started there.
After she got a special offer, that is a tour whit a white orchestra. Billie Holiday was the first black women who work with a white orchestra; it was an arrangement that went against the temper of the times. During this tour she had problems with drugs and alcohol and was arrested several times on narcotics-related charges. She died in New York City in hospital on July 17, 1959, from alcohol- and drug-related complications.
Billie Holiday wasn’t against the white people, she worked whit them and actually educated a good relationship whit them.
Svar #1
04. december 2007 af Da-ted (Slettet)
"her mother was only thirteen years old and her father was fifteen. We do not know much about her father. "
Because of some reason <-- arbejd lidt med den sætning :)
After a couple time been in New York <-- arbejd lidt med den sætning :)
"She began singing in a local club" eller skal der stå "she began signing in at local clubs"?
"Didn't" ret til did not
The audience liked*
Mc was also fascinated by the wonderful voice. Billie Holiday and Mc relationship started there*
Because of some reason <-- arbejd lidt med den sætning :)
After a couple time been in New York <-- arbejd lidt med den sætning :)
"She began singing in a local club" eller skal der stå "she began signing in at local clubs"?
"Didn't" ret til did not
The audience liked*
Mc was also fascinated by the wonderful voice. Billie Holiday and Mc relationship started there*
Svar #2
05. december 2007 af tyra16 (Slettet)
Billie Holiday was born ((in))Eleanora Fagan on April 7, 1915, in Baltimore.
Svar #4
06. december 2007 af Mamoria (Slettet)
"We doesn’t knew much about her father..."
enten:
We did not knew
eller:
we do not know
Alt efter tiden det er skrevet i.
enten:
We did not knew
eller:
we do not know
Alt efter tiden det er skrevet i.
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