Hjælp til at finde fejl i stil.

1: Maybe he just does not wants to know about it.
^Jeg tror bare du manglede "do" indskrivningen. den eneste fejl jeg ville kunne finde på.

9: Even though, the narrator is still thinking a lot about Dr Soleander.

Jeg ville evt. skrive : Even though, the narrator still is thinking alot about Dr. Soleander.

Jeg mener at "a lot" hænger sammen : alot. men jeg er altså ikke sikker, og så ville jeg bytte om på is og still.

Held og lykke med at rette, hvor jeg ser heller ikke nogen fejl :s

1. ...or maybe he just not wants to know about it.

or maybe he just does not want to know about it.
Man kan ikke sige he wants, i den her sammenhæng

2. ...even though she nearly is three months along.

even though she is nearly three months along.
Jeg ville bytte om på is og nearly, men ellers ser jeg heller ingen fejl.

3. It takes a lot of years for a person to find its personality.

It takes a lot of years for a person to find his/hers personality.
a person kan ikke være intetkøn.

4. At the end of the text is a restaurant mentioned again.

At the end of the text a restaurant is mentioned again.
Forkert ordstilling. is skal flyttes hen efter restarant.

6. She was not used to get compliments.

She was not used to getting compliments.
I den her sammenhæng hedder det getting i stedet for get. Jeg ved ikke helt hvorfor :D

7. He would not help her out when she says she is pregnet.

He would not help her out when she said she was pregnant.
Du blander nutid og datid sammen. Pregnet staves pregnant.

8. She has in the beginning a good relationship to her boss.

In the beginning she has a good relationship with her boss.
Forkert ordstilling, og så hedder det with her boss, istedet for to her boss

Tak for hjælpen :)

Er der ingen som kan hjælpe med 5. og 9. i #0 ?

Ved 5eren er det måske fordi, at du har brugt ordet whimsical forkert. Det betyder lunefuld, snurrig, kuriøs.
Derudover bør du ikke bruge udvidet tid, med mindre damen i sætningen mener, at hun kun er lunefuld nogen gange. Hvis det er et konstant karaktertræk, så skal det være 'she characterizes herself as whimsical'

Ved 9eren er det samme gældende: ..the narrator still thinks a lot about Doctor Soleander.