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hurtig, rette

24. januar 2008 af ilubabs (Slettet)

The next morning when I wake up, there was a police man at my room, he said to me, I should go whit him. I don’t remember what i do, but many hours after, I find my self at the police station. I looked around and was scarred, I don’t know what I had to do there. A police man came to me and said he could drive my home, I said it was cool, and goes with him.
Then we had drove in tow days was I finally home, I was were happy,
but what are there happened whit my aeroplane and all the passengers,
I will don’t think about it, I will walk to bed.

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Svar #1
24. januar 2008 af -Zeta- (Slettet)

På engelsk sætter man - som bekendt - (i alle almindelige sætningskonstruktioner) grundleddet foran udsagnsleddet.

Derved kan du ikke sige 'Then we had drove in tow days was I finally home'. Grundleddet 'I' skal stå foran udsagnsleddet 'was'. Desuden hedder det ikke 'drove', men 'driven' i pluskamperfektum. Det staves 'two'. Hedder det i grunden 'then we had' (altså 'then') til at starte med? :-)

Er 'I goes with him' godt engelsk? Sig i stedet fx 'I went with him' eller 'I walked with him'. Eller bedst 'I followed him'.

Kopier også din tekst ind i fx Microsoft Word, og tjek for stavefejl, som fx 'whit'. Du mener jo nok 'with.

Prøv at rette dette og kig dine sætninger godt igennem, og skriv den rettede udgave.

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Svar #2
24. januar 2008 af -Zeta- (Slettet)

Det staves 'two' --> 'tow' staves retteligt 'two'

Svar #3
24. januar 2008 af ilubabs (Slettet)

I walked down at street to find a hotel or something’s other thing. Then I have walked in many hours, I finally find a little house, there I could sleep for to night.
Then I was coming into a room, where I could sleep, walked I to the bet, because I was very tired.
The next morning when I wake up, there was a police man at my room, he said to me, I should go with him. I don’t remember what i do, but many hours after, I find my self at the police station. I looked around and was scarred, I don’t know what I had to do there. A police man came to me and said he could drive my home, I said it was cool, and I went with him.
Then we had drove in two days I was finally home, I was were happy,
but what are there happened with my aeroplane and all the passengers,
I don’t think about anymore because, I was very tired and destroyed.

okay tak ..
bedre??

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Svar #4
24. januar 2008 af -Zeta- (Slettet)

Jeg har ikke tid, men jeg løb lige teksten igennem og rettede lidt.

I walked down a street to find a hotel or something else. Having walked for many hours, I finally found a little house where I could stay overnight.

When I came into the room where I could sleep, I was off to bed, because I was very exhausted.

As I woke up the next morning, a policeman stood in my room and told me that I better follow him.

I do not remember what I did, but a lot of hours later, I found myself in a police station.

I was petrified and looked around; I did not know what I was doing there.

A policeman came to me and said he could drive me home. I was delightful and went with him.

After we had driven for two days, I was finally home. I was very happy, but what have happened to my airplane and all the passengers?

I did not think more about that because I was tired and shattered.

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Svar #5
24. januar 2008 af -Zeta- (Slettet)

Held og lykke med hvad din lære siger om stilen. Forhåbentligt er der ikke for mange fejl, og forhåbentligt har du lært en del.

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Svar #6
24. januar 2008 af -Zeta- (Slettet)

Grr... lære --> lærer

Svar #7
25. januar 2008 af ilubabs (Slettet)

ihh tak, har lige afleveret den og glæder mig til at få karakteren ..
men tror ikk den er sp god..

& jeg har lært meget :D'
så derfor siger jeg tak til hjælpen ..

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