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04. februar 2008 af
maqnz (Slettet)
Hey, jeg tænkte om her var nogen som gad skimte denne artikel igennem jeg har skrevet, for gramattiske fejl? På forhånd, MANGE TAK ! :)
When Eric Harris and Dylan Klebold today, Tuesday, went to school, was it with loaded guns and cars full of explosive. They turned Columbine High School into an inferno of fire, blood and death. The two gunmen, Eric and Dylan, from the suburban Littleton, south of Denver, committed suicide after killing many fellow students at Columbine High School. More than 15 people are death, including themselves. This shooting rampage has also left more than 20 people wounded, some of them critically.
Explosives has been found planted inside the school, therefore is a bomb squad still in work securing the school. For that reason, unidentified death bodies are still scattered around the floor inside Columbine High School. Parents, fellow students and friends are therefore waiting in pain, hope, tears and in fear of losing a near relation.
This massacre poses many questions. For example: Why, and what went wrong? Nobody is able to tell yet. The investigation has just started and is in progress. The only thing the bereaved can do now is to pose themselves with patience, faith and hope.
When Eric Harris and Dylan Klebold today, Tuesday, went to school, was it with loaded guns and cars full of explosive. They turned Columbine High School into an inferno of fire, blood and death. The two gunmen, Eric and Dylan, from the suburban Littleton, south of Denver, committed suicide after killing many fellow students at Columbine High School. More than 15 people are death, including themselves. This shooting rampage has also left more than 20 people wounded, some of them critically.
Explosives has been found planted inside the school, therefore is a bomb squad still in work securing the school. For that reason, unidentified death bodies are still scattered around the floor inside Columbine High School. Parents, fellow students and friends are therefore waiting in pain, hope, tears and in fear of losing a near relation.
This massacre poses many questions. For example: Why, and what went wrong? Nobody is able to tell yet. The investigation has just started and is in progress. The only thing the bereaved can do now is to pose themselves with patience, faith and hope.
Svar #1
04. februar 2008 af maqnz (Slettet)
P.S Den skal aflevere imorgen :) Så det ville være fedt hvis her var nogen som gad rette eventuelle fejl idag ;)
Svar #2
04. februar 2008 af fysik-idioten (Slettet)
When Eric Harris and Dylan Klebold today, Tuesday, went to school, it was with loaded guns and cars full of explosive (hvad?). They turned Columbine High School into an inferno of fire, blood and death. The two gunmen, Eric and Dylan, from the suburban Littleton, south of Denver, committed suicide after killing many fellow students at Columbine High School. More than 15 people are death (were killed?), including themselves. This shooting rampage has also left more than 20 people wounded, some of them critical(ly).
Explosives have been found planted inside the school, which is the reason why a bomb squad still is working on securing the school. Because of that, unidentified death bodies are still scattered around the floor inside Columbine High School. Parents, fellow students and friends are therefore waiting in pain, hope, tears and in fear of losing a near relation.
This massacre poses many questions. For example: Why, and what went wrong? Nobody is able to tell yet. The investigation has just started and is in progress. The only thing the bereaved can do now is to pose themselves with patience, faith and hope.
Explosives have been found planted inside the school, which is the reason why a bomb squad still is working on securing the school. Because of that, unidentified death bodies are still scattered around the floor inside Columbine High School. Parents, fellow students and friends are therefore waiting in pain, hope, tears and in fear of losing a near relation.
This massacre poses many questions. For example: Why, and what went wrong? Nobody is able to tell yet. The investigation has just started and is in progress. The only thing the bereaved can do now is to pose themselves with patience, faith and hope.
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