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Hej folkens. er der nogen der virkelig har lyst til lige at rette teksten forneden, jeg skal aflevere den i morgen. og da jeg ikke er særlig god til engelsk, er den ikke så god. den er meget vigtig, så dte ku væree rigtig dejligt hvis nogen ville :)
The text called” Why I Travel” is written by Don George. He tells about the surprises on travelling. He tells that you must travel to a place that you know well. Because he know Los Angeles very well, and go there very often. He has many acquaintances in L.A. Don George write that, you almost will be surprised on travelling. He was before surprised in Los Angeles which he doesn’t expect. He says that at every travel he met a surprise, which at a piece to his mental picture – puzzle of the world. He says that it is important to know that world we live in as completely as possible. He thinks that it is important to living everything to have an experience. He tells that he travel a lot, after which he get a job as travel writer. He writes that he has been in more than 60 countries and every one of these countries has surprised him and added a piece to his puzzle. He also said that travelling will make him close to God and that the puzzle he talked about maybe is God. He writes that all that you expecting when you travel you must pass on to the world. But know he is very happy, and is glad over his daughters singing the birds etc.
Tak på forhånd :)
Svar #1
20. marts 2009 af Erik Morsing (Slettet)
Der er noget forkert med ordstillingen blandt andet. Det var nemmest for mig at rette, hvis jeg havde den på dansk. Husk især 3. person entals-s
The text called” Why I Travel” is written by Don George. He tells about the surprises on travelling. He tells that you must travel to a place that you know well. Because he know Los Angeles very well, and go there very often (her mangler noget af sætningen).
He has many acquaintances in L.A. Don George write that, you almost will be surprised on travelling. He was before surprised in Los Angeles which he doesn’t expect. (forkert anvendelse af tid)
He says that at every travel he met a surprise, which at a piece to his mental picture – puzzle of the world. He says that it is important to know that world we live in as completely as possible. He thinks that it is important to living everything to have an experience. He tells that he travel a lot, after which he get a job as travel writer. He writes that he has been in more than 60 countries and every one of these countries has surprised him and added a piece to his puzzle. He also said that travelling will make him close to God and that the puzzle he talked about maybe is God. He writes that all that you expecting when you travel you must pass on to the world. But know he is very happy, and is glad over his daughters singing the birds etc.
Svar #2
21. marts 2009 af Vpigen (Slettet)
Det lyder for meget "direkte oversat fra dansk", hvis du forstår, hvad jeg mener. Prøv at bruge nogle ord, som du ikke har brugt så meget før. Så kan det godt komme til at lyde lidt mere professionelt.
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