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Kort rettelse, haster meget.
Mr Kramer’s story.
Dear Ryan I write to you because you are my best friend, and I can talk with you about every thing. I have to tell you something and hope for some help. We had a conversation at work today, between Hassan, Hewett and me. I really hate Hassan, he is black and he is one I no way like to treat, I would prefer not to see him, but it’s hard when he is my employee, so because of that I tell Mr Heweet that Hassan been having some sexual relationship with the girls from the laboratory. and today hassan was called in for interview with Mr Heweet, Irma and me. I was very cold and indifferent to Hassan, for I knew that he had nothing on me. For me the conversation went on to throw Hasaan out. Mr Heweet told Hassan what I had told him, Hassan denied it and blamed me but Irma protected me and said that I newer asked her to do anything like that. It ended well and hassan was fired. But the big problem is that it's all a big lie, the true is that I have been with the girls from the laboratory, and because Irma looks more up to me than Hassan she also lied today. But now I’m sorry that I have lied, somewhere it is very stupid done by me because he is also a man like us and it is pity for him financially, he is already disadvantaged. I admit that I regretted what I did and want to make it good again. But the problem is that I will not admit it to other, special not to Heweet and Hassan because I will not lose to Hassan. Not only that, I also put my job at stake. So what do you think I should do? And how?. Should I admit it to Hassan, or should I take a word with Heweet?. I could also just forget it, but I’m afraid that the girls tell the truth, and in this way, people might look down on me. I hope to hear from you very soon.
Thanks in advance, your friend Kramer.
hej det vil være rigtig dejligt hvis i gad rette den igennem hurtigt. haster meget. :/
Svar #1
30. april 2009 af Da-ted (Slettet)
Mr Kramer’s story.
Dear Ryan <-- husk komma og mellemrum
... my best friend, and <-- ikke komma
every thing <-- et ord
hope for some help <-- hope you can help me (out)
he is black and he is one I no way like to treat, <-- he is black and one I do not want to treat. (punktum)
so because of that <-- which let me no other choice than to tell
hassan been <-- hassan had been
stryg some
for interview <-- in for an interviw
For me the conversation went on to throw Hasaan out <-- uklart hvad ud vil sige men hvis det er (for mig gik det ud opå at få smidt H ud) er det mere i stil med "... it was all about .. "
hat I newer asked her to do anything like that <-- hat I never had asked her to ...
Har ikke rettet videre, men der er flere fjel længere nede. Pas på med dine kommaer. Det forstyrrer lidt læsningen, hvis de ikke er sat korrekt og de er sat forkert flere steder.
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