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At my High school we have a great full canteen with a wide assortment of bread, candy, fruit and beverages. For example we have salad which is a great thing, because when you forget you packed lunch and has money with you, then you can buy something to eat and a lot of students buy salad including my self and It is also very nice that you can get some healthy food, such as fruit and vegetables.
We have a lot possibilities right from the unhealthy to the healthy food in the canteen which is very nice because there is something for everyone, and I think that the most of the students a agree with me.
But one thing that is a huge problem is the prices because they are too high. Many of the things we buy in canteen is double expensive than in the baker or the shop. With means that many students do not want to use the canteen but they go rather then to the bakery to buy some kind of bread or a pizza which is much chipper. An ordinary roll costs about 9 kr. Which for some people are too much. And therefore the canteen lose a lot of clients.

På det sidste? They started with some offer, which I think are a very god idea. But In my opinion they still should change their prices, they should bring the price down on beverages and generally bread to attract more students because their policy with high prices will not (holde I længden).