rettelse af et par sætninger

Hej

Er nogle der lige gider at kigge på disse sætninger og se om der er nogle fejl, vil gerne have en begrudelse, hvis der er nogle. Teksten skal være i nutid, men med enkle steder, hvor han fortæller om noget der sket.

The girl looks at him and the suspense is painted in her face.

Now he only drives 50 mph and his fingers run over the cobra.

Suddenly he gets the feeling that he wishes to tell Kim all about his life.

“We began to steal cars and drive around. Then it gets fun to drive on the Interstate, very fast and with loud music, but I hate the other boys, they don’t understand to have fun.
So I decide to drive alone. One evening I pick up a girl in a lay-by and killed her. The adrenaline pumped in my body and I want to do it again. I killed three other girls!”

She looks shocked and says “I don’t know. Maybe you should tell the police and get on with your life.”
He scratches the cobra. “Maybe you are right; I have to tell the police and get on with my life.”