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Tjek for biord
31. januar 2005 af
Bella (Slettet)
Hej!
Jeg ville blive superglad hvis I gad at tjekke om de ord jeg har markeret med store bogstaver er småadverbier og om de står rigtigt. Hvis I ser andre fejl der skurrer i jeres øjne, må i også godt sige til!
The life of a Bottlemessage
On a beach, that is SELDOM visited, lies a bottle. If you look closer you can see that is contains a rolled piece of paper.
It all started with a flight trough the air. Then the ocean ACTUALLY surrounded the bottle for a moment, before it appeared at the surface again. The ocean was NEVER calm, so the bottle was tossed around by the waves. Suddenly it found itself surrounded by a flock of whales. The big animals were breaking through the surface to get air. Luckily they didn’t harm it, so the bottle JUST carried on. SOMETIMES days went by without any big events, but then the bottle could sense a change in the weather. The wind intensified and the waves ALSO became bigger and more violent. The bottle OFTEN feared for its own safety, because the waves threw it around in the air.
When the storm calmed down, the bottle SOON reassured itself. Fare away it saw a ship nearing. The ship came closer and closer, and the bottle began to hope that someone would see it and pick it up. But no one did, and the bottle was disappointed. It had REALLY hoped that it could have been opened so that the purpose of its life could be fulfilled.
Then it was washed ashore.
A little girl appears on the beach. “Please let her find me” the bottlemessage wishes. And she does. She gently opens the bottle and fishes out the paper. She leaves the bottle at the beach and disappears over a dune.
Tusind tak!!
Jeg ville blive superglad hvis I gad at tjekke om de ord jeg har markeret med store bogstaver er småadverbier og om de står rigtigt. Hvis I ser andre fejl der skurrer i jeres øjne, må i også godt sige til!
The life of a Bottlemessage
On a beach, that is SELDOM visited, lies a bottle. If you look closer you can see that is contains a rolled piece of paper.
It all started with a flight trough the air. Then the ocean ACTUALLY surrounded the bottle for a moment, before it appeared at the surface again. The ocean was NEVER calm, so the bottle was tossed around by the waves. Suddenly it found itself surrounded by a flock of whales. The big animals were breaking through the surface to get air. Luckily they didn’t harm it, so the bottle JUST carried on. SOMETIMES days went by without any big events, but then the bottle could sense a change in the weather. The wind intensified and the waves ALSO became bigger and more violent. The bottle OFTEN feared for its own safety, because the waves threw it around in the air.
When the storm calmed down, the bottle SOON reassured itself. Fare away it saw a ship nearing. The ship came closer and closer, and the bottle began to hope that someone would see it and pick it up. But no one did, and the bottle was disappointed. It had REALLY hoped that it could have been opened so that the purpose of its life could be fulfilled.
Then it was washed ashore.
A little girl appears on the beach. “Please let her find me” the bottlemessage wishes. And she does. She gently opens the bottle and fishes out the paper. She leaves the bottle at the beach and disappears over a dune.
Tusind tak!!
Svar #1
31. januar 2005 af Fingersen (Slettet)
On a beach that is seldom visited lies a bottle. If you look closer you can see that it contains a rolled piece of paper.
It all started with a flight trough the air. For a moment the bottle was pulled under water before it surfaced again.
The ocean was never calm, so the bottle was tossed around by the waves.
Suddenly it found itself encircled by a flock of whales. The big animals were surfacing to get air.
Luckily they did not harm the bottle, so it just carried on.
Days sometimes went by without any big events, however, the bottle suddenly started to sense a change in the weather.
The wind intensified and also the waves became bigger and more violent.
Since the waves threw it around in the air, the bottle often feared for its safety.
When the storm calmed down, the bottle soon reassured itself. Far away it saw a ship nearing.
The ship came closer and closer, and the bottle began to hope that someone would see it and pick it up.
But no one did, and the bottle became disappointed.
It really hoped that it could have been opened so its life had been meaningful
It was washed ashore instead.
MVH
Fingersen
It all started with a flight trough the air. For a moment the bottle was pulled under water before it surfaced again.
The ocean was never calm, so the bottle was tossed around by the waves.
Suddenly it found itself encircled by a flock of whales. The big animals were surfacing to get air.
Luckily they did not harm the bottle, so it just carried on.
Days sometimes went by without any big events, however, the bottle suddenly started to sense a change in the weather.
The wind intensified and also the waves became bigger and more violent.
Since the waves threw it around in the air, the bottle often feared for its safety.
When the storm calmed down, the bottle soon reassured itself. Far away it saw a ship nearing.
The ship came closer and closer, and the bottle began to hope that someone would see it and pick it up.
But no one did, and the bottle became disappointed.
It really hoped that it could have been opened so its life had been meaningful
It was washed ashore instead.
MVH
Fingersen
Svar #2
31. januar 2005 af Bella (Slettet)
Tusind tak Fingersen! Men er der ikke én der vil kommentere biordene? Har jeg sat dem ind så det er biord?
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