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Stress is a very normal problem nowadays. All age of groups age groups are victims of this new disease. Many students suffer by  from stress. But what could be the reasons behind this epidemic? One of the reasons could  might probably be the high expectations from their parents, teachers and overall/generelly the society, who all wants them to do well in their education. Beside their studies, they have to be “good enough” with their newest materiel stuff to in order to not be left out. For that they have to earn their own money/,/ because their parents cannot afford all their demands. They have to face competition everywhere/,/ : in studies, fashion, having the lately latest material things, for example laptop, iPod etc. All these high expectations leads to the fact that many people in the young generation are the victims of stress. 

I sætningen: For that they have to earn their own money mener du der: På grund af det er de nød til at tjene deres egne penge. I så fald ville jeg omskrive den til følgende: Because of that, they have to earn their own money.

 mange tak :) det var super