Hjælp til engelsk grammatik (7 linjer)

 Jeg ville ændre "took it up" til "picked it up".. Mindre detalje. 
"saw out in the garden" --"looked at the garden"

"He is programmed to that he do" - hvad skal der stå her? det giver ikke helt mening. do bliver også til does.

"..I don't know about you love me" -- "I don't know if you love me"

"From now I..." -- "From now on I.."

"Make you can feel my love to you" - hvad præcis skal der stå?

 Det er sience fiction. 

1. He is programmed to that he do - Han er programmeret til det han gør.

Make you can feel my love to you - Gøre sådan, du kan mærke min kærlighed.

The mother went upstairs and was looking looked for him in his bedroom but David was not there. there wasn’t any David. She saw a kind piece of paper on the floor and took picked it up. It was the letter from David. She saw looked out of the window and saw David in the garden. out in the garden. There was David. She took put the letter in her pocket and walked went outside. “David!” she called and David heard it. She came to approached him and said: “What is wrong? Is there anything you want to say to me?” David didn’t answer. “David you know you can tell me anything”. “Mom, I miss you. Teddy is a machine and he is not real. He is programmed to do what that he does” he said quietly. She answered: “But David, I’m here all the time?”. “Yes, I know that, but it is not the same. You do not play with me and I don’t know if about you love me”. “Of course I love you. From now on I will play with you and make you can feel my love to for you”. “Thanks mom” he said.