Hjælp til style of writing analysis

Hej. Jeg har fået det her uddrag af en novlle, hvor jeg skal anaylsere style of writing. Jeg ved ikke helt, hvad jeg skal lægge mærke til. Håber i kan hjælpe med at pege på noget. Tak på forhånd.

“Get lost, dyke,” one of his mates says to me when I press forward, and
I tumble back onto some bird’s toe and scurry to find another place to stand.
The crowd sparks as Breed plays her radio hit as a closer. She sings it
differently, addressing the room between verses. Then she slows down and
flicks her hair up, her gaze on mine, the blue-green of her eyes like a globe, and

even though she must be forty-five, easy, I can’t help but lower my own look.
Her breasts prominent in the muscle shirt. I don’t need to think about what
Jaye would say, because I’m thinking it. Too deadly.