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Land of the Lost
The short story is written in 2009 by Stewart O'Nan

The genre is epic and it could happen in real life.
     The story is about a woman who lives alone with her dog, Ollie. The woman is trying to find a kidnapped and killed girl, who has been missing who has been missing for about 2 years/ Who disappeared about 2 years ago. First she followed the case in the newspaper and on TV, but when she finds out that the body is buried west of Kingsville, she starts looking for the body there.
     The problem in the story is the main character who is keen on finding the body and show people that she is not crazy “Then everyone would know she wasn’t crazy, l. 141-142”.
     The main character is a woman; we don’t really hear about her and don’t know her name. She lives with her dog in Perry. She was married and she has two sons. She is a cashier in a supermarket called BI-LO. She lives alone with her dog, Ollie, who is a German shepherd.
One of her sons called Brian, who is the oldest “l. 89-90 and l. 138”. If she got a idea, she'd go after it and not stop before she finds what she is looking for, like when she tries to find the body in two and half years “l. 74”.
The murder, who killed the girl, is called James Wade “l. 6-7”.

Hej! har prøvet at læse det du har skrevet igenem og har rettet nogle småfejl :) Nu har jeg ikke læst bogen så har kun rettet det gramatiske. Jeg ved ikke om jeg har fundet all fejlene da jeg kun har læst din tekst igennem en gang, men er sikker på su kan skrive noget mere :) f.eks. taler du om hende der med hunden både i starten og lidt i midten. tal om de vigtige først og så de mindre vigtige. det er lidt forvirrende på den måde du har skrevet det. Men det er godt! klap på skulderen! :) håber det hjælper.

okay, tak skal du ha

Så lidt :) men går kun i 9. så ved ikke om du vil bruge det... :D

Jo, jeg har rettet fejlene.
Og selvom du går i 9. kan du godt være bedre til engelsk end en fra 2. g : )

Super! Tak tak :)