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He has killed her, maybe he has raped her or maybe the death girl and James was together, because the main character found a sleeping bag and other stuff there, so James and the girl maybe was together “l. 132-136”
     We hear that she tried to find the body in about two years, but we hear the story in 9 months, from March to November “l. 76 and l. 122”.
So in the story we hear her experience when it’s spring, summer and autumn. She finds the body last autumn, it is a good time to find the body because if it was winter she wouldn’t find the body, because of the snow.
     She found the body, because she found some stuff and rusty teeth “l. 132-137”, so the body has to be there.
     The main character got what she wanted, she found the body and now she gets attention from her sons, not only them, but also from other people, the newspapers, TV etc.
     There are dialogues, between the main character and an agent “l. 48-50”, and with her son Brian too. This conversation between her and the son shows that her sons think about her and they worry about her, but she can see it “was that no one else needed her, l. 61-62 and “I don’t understand why you’re so upset,” she said. “I’m worried about you. Do you understand why?”, l. 89-98”.
     One of the themes could be mystery, because we don’t why James has killed the girl and why he lied about where he has buried the girl.
The other theme could be loneliness, because the main character lives alone with her dog and has nothing to do, so she spends her time with find a girl, she doesn’t know