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Videreskrivning på H.C Andersen eventyr
He had to find a way to reach his bride on. He intended his friend Peter Butterfly who also lived in the woods.
He called him, "Peter, Peter where are you?” There was no answer, but out of the blue, "I'm right here can’t you see me?" Peter Butterfly said. The coming prince was delighted at the sight of his friend. He told Peter Butterfly the whole story; that a spark from the firework had set the trunk on fire, and burned it to ashes, so he didn’t have any way to reach his love.
Peter Butterfly would be happy to help his friend; Merchant’s son jumped on the back of the butterfly and flew away. They flew over forests, mountains and deserts until they reached the palace where the bride waited impatiently. The king thanked the butterfly for the inconvenience.
The merchant's son and the princess were married and they lived happily, and Peter Butterfly got a place at the castle
Svar #1
24. november 2011 af Anni123 (Slettet)
He had to find a way to reach his bride on. --> undlad ON til sidst. Pas på med at det ikke bliver for "dansk" :)
He intended --> betyder "at agte" fx. How does he intend to tackle this --> hvordan har han tænkt sig at bla bla. så brug et andet ord hvis du mener at han vil "besøge Peter Butterfly så brug måske visit etc.
but out of the blue --> but suddenly out of the blue
Svar #2
24. november 2011 af Andersen11 (Slettet)
Det ser ud til at være den samme opgave, du har haft kørende flere gange, som her https://www.studieportalen.dk/Forums/Thread.aspx?id=1090207
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