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Bill was looking at Jerry and he knew that they had gone too far.He thought about his wife, how her reaction would be if she was the victim. Bill began to imagine the whole thing, how Linda would have screamed and begged for help, how would they suppose to look at the mirror after this episode. Yes, Bill had the lust, but if he did this his conscience would haunt him rest of his life. But it was too late. Jerry stared at Bill and Bill could see that there was no way out from this lust, and it was what Jerry´s eyes have told him. Jerry ran towards the girls.  Before Bill should make the run, he realized that there wouldn’t be a difference between him and an animal, that was following its instincts and lusts. Just then Jerry shouted: “ Come on dude, we did this together and shall end it together!”.  Then Bill answered: “yes we did a big mistake together, and now we need to make an end of all this abuse!” Bill could see the anger in Jerry´s face; he took his breath like a bull that was ready to strike the matador. Jerry turned back and realized that Jerry was bought to sense by the words; Bill also turned back and was going. Then out of the blue, Bill found himself on the ground. He felt a big pain in his head and the last thing he saw was Jerry´s big smile. There was gone 1-2 hour, and the car wasn’t where it should be. The pain continued and Bill gathered his courage in a deep breath. He ran towards the girls and saw that there was no one. There were tracks of blood and there were a smell of dead. Bill went home and for his surprise he saw jerry sitting on the chair drinking a beer. Bill: “So what happened to the girls”?. Jerry:”  “your way of thinking is acceptable”. Bill was shocked, he didn’t know what he should do. After a couple of minutes their wives came towards them.

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