hvad er fejlene? hjæælp

Jeg er nu ikke ekspert, men her er nogen fejl jeg kan se straks:

'I have miss you so much - I (have) missed you so much

and i hope you are exciting to come in Denmark - and I hope you are exciting about coming to Denmark

I miss you so much, and im looking forward to see you. - I missed you so much, and am ...

Well, you are maybe thinking, what i will show you in Denmark. - Well, you're maybe thinking about what I will show you in Denmark.

Denmark is a little country, like i always had told you - Denmark is a small country, just like I always told you.

Okay, I think I will show you my favorite things in Denmark du kunne også bruge places istedet for ''things''

i will primaly show you the church we have in Denmark, - I will probably show.....

 because i think its importent to see what there are all around in Denmark. - ..... what there is all around Denmark

And we can never forget Copenhagen. - And we can't forget Copenhagen

And there are actually, many funny things. - and there is actually ..

Like men og women who make some funny shows. - Like men and women who preforms some funny shows

HUSK ''JEG'' PÅ ENGELSK ER ''I'' OG SKAL SKRIVES MED STORT :)

Tusind tak. Det var en stor hjælp! Men hvordan kan jeg vide om der skal være "is" eller "are" ?

I am

you are

he/she/it is

I have miss (brug kort tillægsform / past participle af verbet) you so much, and i (< stavebøf) hope you are exciting (brug kort tillægsform (past participle), ikke lang tillægsform (present participle) to come in (præpositionsfejl) Denmark.

I miss you so much, and im (stavebøf samt fejl i sammentrækning) looking forward to see (præpositioner udløser gerundiumsform ("-ing-form") af efterfølgende verbum) you. And of course don’t forget my gift.

Well, you are maybe thinking, what i will (stavebøf og forkert ordstilling), (<– drop kommaet) show you in Denmark. (erstat punktum med spørgsmålstegn)

Denmark is a little (der er et andet ord som også betyder 'lille'; frem med ordbogen) country, like i always had (stavebøf og forkert ordstilling) told you. Okay, i think i will (stavebøffer) show you my favorite (AmE favorite, BrE favourite) things in Denmark. I will primaly (who now, what now?) show you the church we have in Denmark (there's more than one church in Denmark, darl...), (lose the comma) because i (stavebøf) think its (fejl i sammentrækning) importent (stavebøf) to see what there are (verbalkongruensfejl) all around in Denmark.

And we can never forget Copenhagen. We mustn't forget (about) Copenhagen (although Jo's suggestion (#1) is equally valid). The best turist (stavebøf) place, were (forkert ord..og det udtales heller ikke som det ord du skal bruge) we can shop, eat som delicios (stavebøffer) food.

And There are actually, (lose the comma) many funny things to see in Denmark. Like men og (<– øhm..) women who make some funny shows. (De to sidste sætninger er, udover svipserne, grammatisk korrekte, men – strengt taget –  reelt indholdsløse og på grænsen til uforståelige for en med engelsk som modersmål.)