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NEEEJ, hvor er jeg bare ring!

11. september 2013 af Dostyou (Slettet)

Hej folkens .. Vi skal skrive en tale ligesom Amercian Dream

. Jeg vil bare gerne have nogen retter min tale igennem .. det er en tale der er skrevet til kololisering 

In these hard times with financial problems, we Americans,will have to work together to solve the issue. We will always stay together, and keep our heads high no matter how rough a time we are going through. We are the land of opportunity. They built up the country with hard work they did not give up they fought and fought until they reached their goals. It was hard, but they got over it, and it was better times and overcome .To begin to look at the new and better times with even more success and wealth (prosperity) ..No challenge exists that the american nation cannot overcome, we just need to  stand together in the faith of the American Dream. “We have faced significant challenges before and made sacrifices, but we always moved on and was able to steer towards new and better times.


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Svar #1
11. september 2013 af Jegvedingenting

Et lille spørgsmål. Når du skriver "ligesom", mener du så en tale på engelsk om danskerne eller amerikanerne?


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Svar #2
11. september 2013 af Andersen11 (Slettet)

ring! --> ringe

Amercian --> American

Hvad betyder "kololisering"?

Tegnsætningen er meget mangelfuld.

In these hard times with financial problems, we Americans, will have to work together to solve the issue. We will always stay together, and keep our heads high no matter how rough a time we are going through. We are the land of opportunity. They (who are they?) built up the country with hard work (period) They did not give up they fought and fought until they reached their goals. It was hard, but they got over it, and it was better times and overcome .To begin to look at the new and better times with even more success and wealth (prosperity) ..No challenge exists that the american nation cannot overcome, we just need to  stand together in the faith of the American Dream??. “We have faced significant challenges before and made sacrifices, but we always moved on and was able to steer towards new and better times. (quotation?)


Svar #3
11. september 2013 af Dostyou (Slettet)

Dem du har streget under.. skal de slettes?


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Svar #4
11. september 2013 af Andersen11 (Slettet)

#3

Nej, det er steder, hvor der skal rettes noget.


Svar #5
11. september 2013 af Dostyou (Slettet)

Når okay tak ..:)


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