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Hjælp til grammatiske fejl
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Oversættelsen er fra et eksamenssæt, engelsk A-niveau.
"Tusinder af demonstanter protestede sent i aftens fredeligt i San Francisco mod Kina. Et stort antal politifolk skal forhindre kaotiske scener som dem, man oplevede i London og Paris, når OL-symbolet, den olympiske flamme, snere i aften bæres gennem byens gader på sit eneste stop i Nordamerika. Og hvis det kommer til ballede, kan den planlagte rute gennem byen med kort varsel nemt ændres, eller det hele aflyses. Foreløbig er syv allerede anholdt, fordi de hængte plakater om Kinas brud på menneskerettighederne op i lygtepælene"
"Thousands of demonstrators were protesting peacefully in San Francisco against China late last night. Plenties of policemen is going to prevent the chaotic scenes like those we experienced in London and Paris, when the OL-symbol, the olympic torch, later in the evening is getting carried through/across the streets of the city, with only 1 stop in north america. And if there is going to be any trouble, the planned route across the city can easily, on short notice, be either changed or cancelled.
7 people are already under arrest so far, because they hung posters of chinas breach of the human rights from the lamp posts."
Svar #1
09. november 2013 af MalcoP (Slettet)
Min suggestion:
Thousands of protesters were protesting peacefully late last night in SF against China. A big number of policemen are going to prevent chaotic scenes of the likes we saw in both London and Paris as the OL-symbol and the olympic torch gets carried through the streets later this evening, with the only stop being in North America. Upon any trouble, the route can easily be either changed or cancelled. Seven people have already been arrested, because they hung posters of... Magter sku ikke lige det sidste, ved ikke hvordan man skal få det til at give mening.
Svar #2
10. november 2013 af nad1 (Slettet)
My suggestion
Thousands of demonstrators peacefully protested late in the evening in San Francisco on China. A large number of policemen will prevent the chaotic scenes, as those were seen in London and Paris when the Olympic symbol, the Olympic flame will be carried later in the evening through the city streets on its only stop in North America. And if there is a trouble, the planned route through the city will easily be changed or canceled upon short notice. So far, seven have already been arrested because they hung posters about China's human rights violations on the lamppostsThousands of demonstrators peacefully protested late in the evening in San Francisco on China. A large number of policemen will prevent the chaotic scenes, as those were seen in London and Paris when the Olympic symbol, the Olympic flame will be carried later in the evening through the city streets on its only stop in North America. And if there is a trouble, the planned route, through the city, will easily be changed or canceled upon short notice. So far, seven have already been arrested because they hung posters about China's human rights violations on the lampposts.
Svar #3
10. november 2013 af nad1 (Slettet)
The first correct sentence will be: Thousands of demonstrators peacefully protested late in the evening in San Francisco against China
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