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Isabella

It was just another normal day on work. I was doing the same Things as usual. Preparing for our customers to buy for all their money. The Sun was shining and suddenly something strange happent. I was looking through the big window and then I saw a strange man while dressing our dolls.  He was trying to get peoples attention by during his survey. But he didn’t succeed. Everyone single person was actually ignoring him but why? I would like to take his test and make his job easier.  He is making some strange things jumping around, trying to get attention in a different way that I have never seen before. I find him extremely funny and attractive way. I don’t know how to explain it, but he seems to be a warm, funny and in the same way smart, I like his casual style. I’m glad that there is an hour more until people can get in here because I really want to stare more at him I’m really entertained. I don’t hope that we would be able to reach eye contact but at the same time I wanted to. This feeling is strange. I actually liked the way he looked at me; he looked deep in to my eyes like he was thinking the same as me.  We reached contact and then I had to work on something inside. So I left the window for like 10 minutes and then he was gone. I was really sad because I really wanted to have more eye contact and maybe later we have a coffee together. But my dream was lost and I didn’t know what to do. Maybe he didn’t wanted the same as me.

Jack

My name is Jack and I am working for a mobile company. I’m trying to sell mobile phones to people walking through the street. Well people think that my survey and questions are boring they are just walking away from me.  Maybe I should trying earning money in a different way. Anyway this is boring for me so maybe I should jump around and make some funny things.  I can’t be serious in more than one our and that is why the company threw me out at the street. People are still walking and ignoring me. I find it really hard to get their attention. But I can feel something, like eyes trying to reach my attention but where are those eyes? I feel that those eyes who ever it is needs my attention.  I looked behind me and suddenly I reached eye contact with the most beautiful girl I’ve seen.  We were staring at each other for like 5 minutes. My heart was pumping five times faster than normal. I can’t explain why but the way she looked at me just maked me feel that she wanted me in some way.  From that moment we kept staring at each other. Suddenly she disappeared and I couldn’t find her again. I really hoped that she felt the same as I did. While she was gone I hoped she felt the same way.  I couldn’t find her and I actually panicked. How could she just leave me like everyone was doing on the street? Well she gave me a smile and that was enough for me to feel happy. I just hoped that I could find a way to talk to her.

2 Days later

I was doing my job again at the street and then the same woman came to me. We talked to each other and arranged a date later. My first date in 2 years!! Wu huu. Nothing could stop my happiness now. I hope everyone finds their true love because I did.