rigtigt?? - rettelse

Hej.. er der nogle flinke folk herinde som lige kan hjælpe med en lille rettelse??

When Casper and Frank comes back to Mia and Iben in the summerhouse, Mia and Iben, ask them about, where they have been, after which Frank and Casper tells them, that they just were swimming alone, and that Frank was unlucky to hurt his penis on a stinging jellyfish. But just when they have said that, the two young girls are coming, to hear how it goes with Franks penis – sounds very distrustfully. This release a big discussion, and very slowly Casper is Chancing side, and tells now Mia and Iben, that it was Franks fault it all, and that he all the time, has tried to stop Frank, and tell him, that these things are wrong to do. Which is totally upturned, when the truth is, that it was Casper, who wanted to do all these things, against what frank told him. Everyone besides Frank leaves the place, and Frank ended again as a “Clown”.
All the “clown” series is instructed by Frank Hvam and Casper Christensen themselves, and I think they are winners, because they have gained to make a good series, with such a plain but still funny humour. Besides that, I think their message, and things they are giving the Danish people, via their series, is just so cool. And I think, that they have catch the red thread, this realistic, and vulgar humour is just planed after my framework.

Dansk version

Da Casper og Frank kommer tilbage til Mia og iben i sommerhuset, spørger mia og iben hvor de har været, hvorefter Frank og Capser fortæller dem, at de bare var ude og svømme alene, og at Frank var så uheldig at skade sin penis på en brandmand. Men lige som de havde sagt det, kommer de to unge piger, for at høre hvordan det går med Franks penis - lyder mistænktsom. Dette udløser en stor diskussion, og meget langsomt skifter casper side, og fortæller nu mia og iben, at det er franks skyld det hele, og at han hele tiden har prøvet at stoppe ham, og fortælle ham, at det er forkert at gøre. Hvilket er totalt omvendt, da sandheden er, at det var Casper, som ønskede at gøre alle disse ting, imod hvad frank sagde. Alle udover frank forlader stedet, og Frank ender igen som en klovn.
Hele klovn serien er instrueret er Frank hvam og casper christensen dem selv, og jeg synes de er vindere, fordi de har formået at lave en god serie, med sådan en plan, men stadig sjov humor. Udover det, synes jeg den besked de giver til det danske folk, via deres serie, er så sej.
Og jeg synes de har fanget den røde tråd, denne realistiske, simple humor, er lige planlagt efter mit skema.