Engelsk
rettelse søges..
03. april 2006 af
figaro8 (Slettet)
hej er der nogen der ville være søde at kigge på det her?
One of my favourite episodes is “Sommerhuset”/summerhouse. In this episode are Casper, Frank, Mia and Iben going to a summerhouse, near the water- a nice weekend, with relaxation and nice comfort. Frank and Casper drives in their own car, and the girls in another. On the way up there, Frank and Casper pick up two hot young girls, just to give them a ride, which later shows to be a bad idea. But Frank, Casper, Mia and Iben, comes up to the summerhouse, and everything are just going fine. They are merry going to the beach, and while they are laying and enjoy sun, Mia and Iben ask Casper and Frank, if they want to go in the water with them, after which booth of them says- no, “because they are not swimming in the cold Danish water”. So while Iben and Mia, are swimming alone, Casper and frank takes a walk down the beach, and drinks some wine. Suddenly they see two girls the girls, they gave a ride. They begin talk with them, and then the two hot young girls gives the same question like Mia and Iben, namely about if Casper and frank wants to go in the water with them, and in contrast to before, they are now saying yes, and after that, they are going in the water with the two girls. They are having allot of fun in the water, until Frank is so unlucky to hurt his penis, on a stinging jellyfish, and the lifeguard now saves the very pitiable frank from “drowning”. while Frank is totally naked and laying on the ground, getting cream on his penis, the girls are looking at it, but like the big “hero” Casper is, he gets them pushed back.
dansk version..:
en af mine favorit episoder hedder sommerhuset. I denne episode skal casper,frank,mia og iben hen til et sommerhus - en dejlig weekend med afslapning og hygge. Frank og casper kører i deres egen bil, og pigerne i en anden. På vej derop, samler Frank og Casper to unge piger op, bare for at give dem et lift, hvilket senere skulle vise sig at være en dårlig ide. Men de kommer alle op til sommerhuset, og alt går bare fint. De går glade til stranden, og mens de ligger og nyder solen, spørger mia og iben frank og casper om de vil med ud i vandet, hvorefter de begge siger nej, da de "ikke bader i det kolde danske vand". Så mens Mia og Iben alene bader i vandet, går frank og casper en tur langs stranden, og drikker noget vin. Pludselig ser de to piger, pigerne de gav et lift. De begynder at snakke med dem, og de to unge hotte piger giver det samme spørgsmål som mia og iben, nemlig om de har lyst til at gå i vandet. Og i modsætning til før, siger de nu ja, og går i vandet med de to piger. De har det sjovt i vandet, lige indtil Frank er så uheldig at skade sin penis på en brandmand, og livrederen redder nu den meget pinlige frank fra at "drukne". Mens frank ligger fuldstændig nøgen på jorden, og får cream på hans penis, kigger pigerne på det, men som den store "helt" casper er, får han dem skubbet tilbage.
One of my favourite episodes is “Sommerhuset”/summerhouse. In this episode are Casper, Frank, Mia and Iben going to a summerhouse, near the water- a nice weekend, with relaxation and nice comfort. Frank and Casper drives in their own car, and the girls in another. On the way up there, Frank and Casper pick up two hot young girls, just to give them a ride, which later shows to be a bad idea. But Frank, Casper, Mia and Iben, comes up to the summerhouse, and everything are just going fine. They are merry going to the beach, and while they are laying and enjoy sun, Mia and Iben ask Casper and Frank, if they want to go in the water with them, after which booth of them says- no, “because they are not swimming in the cold Danish water”. So while Iben and Mia, are swimming alone, Casper and frank takes a walk down the beach, and drinks some wine. Suddenly they see two girls the girls, they gave a ride. They begin talk with them, and then the two hot young girls gives the same question like Mia and Iben, namely about if Casper and frank wants to go in the water with them, and in contrast to before, they are now saying yes, and after that, they are going in the water with the two girls. They are having allot of fun in the water, until Frank is so unlucky to hurt his penis, on a stinging jellyfish, and the lifeguard now saves the very pitiable frank from “drowning”. while Frank is totally naked and laying on the ground, getting cream on his penis, the girls are looking at it, but like the big “hero” Casper is, he gets them pushed back.
dansk version..:
en af mine favorit episoder hedder sommerhuset. I denne episode skal casper,frank,mia og iben hen til et sommerhus - en dejlig weekend med afslapning og hygge. Frank og casper kører i deres egen bil, og pigerne i en anden. På vej derop, samler Frank og Casper to unge piger op, bare for at give dem et lift, hvilket senere skulle vise sig at være en dårlig ide. Men de kommer alle op til sommerhuset, og alt går bare fint. De går glade til stranden, og mens de ligger og nyder solen, spørger mia og iben frank og casper om de vil med ud i vandet, hvorefter de begge siger nej, da de "ikke bader i det kolde danske vand". Så mens Mia og Iben alene bader i vandet, går frank og casper en tur langs stranden, og drikker noget vin. Pludselig ser de to piger, pigerne de gav et lift. De begynder at snakke med dem, og de to unge hotte piger giver det samme spørgsmål som mia og iben, nemlig om de har lyst til at gå i vandet. Og i modsætning til før, siger de nu ja, og går i vandet med de to piger. De har det sjovt i vandet, lige indtil Frank er så uheldig at skade sin penis på en brandmand, og livrederen redder nu den meget pinlige frank fra at "drukne". Mens frank ligger fuldstændig nøgen på jorden, og får cream på hans penis, kigger pigerne på det, men som den store "helt" casper er, får han dem skubbet tilbage.
Svar #3
03. april 2006 af dnadan (Slettet)
efter hurtig gennemlæsning, kan jeg se at du skal kigge lidt på verberne, i nogle sætninger mangler du er hjælpe verbum og i andre har du lavet en kongruens fejl( hvilket trækker uhyre meget ned)...
prøv lige at få rettet dem, så skal vi nok vende tilbage til dig...
prøv lige at få rettet dem, så skal vi nok vende tilbage til dig...
Svar #4
03. april 2006 af MikAnd (Slettet)
In this episode /are/ Casper, Frank, Mia and Iben (are) going to a summerhouse
Frank and Casper drive/s/
But Frank, Casper, Mia and Iben, /comes up to/ arrive at the summerhouse
and everything /are/ (seems) /just going/ fine
Har ikke lige tid til mere.. Men kan se i den næste sætning at du misser -ing formen..
Frank and Casper drive/s/
But Frank, Casper, Mia and Iben, /comes up to/ arrive at the summerhouse
and everything /are/ (seems) /just going/ fine
Har ikke lige tid til mere.. Men kan se i den næste sætning at du misser -ing formen..
Svar #5
03. april 2006 af figaro8 (Slettet)
ok dnadan... har rettet dem jeg kunne se...
One of my favourite episodes is “Sommerhuset”/summerhouse. In this episode Casper, Frank, Mia and Iben going to a summerhouse, near the water- a nice weekend, with relaxation and nice comfort. Frank and Casper drive in their own car, and the girls in another. On the way up there, Frank and Casper pick up two hot young girls, just to give them a ride, which later shows to be a bad idea. But Frank, Casper, Mia and Iben, comes up to the summerhouse, and everything seems fine. They are merry going to the beach, and while they are laying and enjoying the sun, Mia and Iben ask Casper and Frank, if they want to go in the water with them, after which booth of them says- no, “because they are not swimming in the cold Danish water”. So while Iben and Mia, swim alone, Casper and frank takes a walk down the beach, and drinks some wine. Suddenly they see two girls, the girls, they gave a ride. They begin talk with them, and the two hot young girls then gives the same question like Mia and Iben, namely about if Casper and frank wants to go in the water with them, and in contrast to before, they now says yes, and after that, they are going in the water with the two girls. They are having allot of fun in the water, until Frank is so unlucky to hurt his penis, on a stinging jellyfish, and the lifeguard now saves the very pitiable frank from “drowning”, and while Frank is totally naked and laying on the ground, getting cream on his penis, the girls are looking at it, but like the big “hero” Casper is, he gets them pushed back.
One of my favourite episodes is “Sommerhuset”/summerhouse. In this episode Casper, Frank, Mia and Iben going to a summerhouse, near the water- a nice weekend, with relaxation and nice comfort. Frank and Casper drive in their own car, and the girls in another. On the way up there, Frank and Casper pick up two hot young girls, just to give them a ride, which later shows to be a bad idea. But Frank, Casper, Mia and Iben, comes up to the summerhouse, and everything seems fine. They are merry going to the beach, and while they are laying and enjoying the sun, Mia and Iben ask Casper and Frank, if they want to go in the water with them, after which booth of them says- no, “because they are not swimming in the cold Danish water”. So while Iben and Mia, swim alone, Casper and frank takes a walk down the beach, and drinks some wine. Suddenly they see two girls, the girls, they gave a ride. They begin talk with them, and the two hot young girls then gives the same question like Mia and Iben, namely about if Casper and frank wants to go in the water with them, and in contrast to before, they now says yes, and after that, they are going in the water with the two girls. They are having allot of fun in the water, until Frank is so unlucky to hurt his penis, on a stinging jellyfish, and the lifeguard now saves the very pitiable frank from “drowning”, and while Frank is totally naked and laying on the ground, getting cream on his penis, the girls are looking at it, but like the big “hero” Casper is, he gets them pushed back.
Svar #7
03. april 2006 af dnadan (Slettet)
her er mine rettelser så, men garanterer ikke for at den er fejløs:
In this episode of 'Sommerhuset' Casper, Frank, Mia and Iben are going to a summerhouse, they'll have a nice weekend in the summerhouse, which is near the water, with relaxation and nice comfort. The four youngsters drive in 2 cars; Frank and Casper in their car, and the girls in another. On the way up there, Frank and Casper pick up two beautiful young girls, just to give them a ride, which later turns out to be a bad idea.When Frank, Casper, Mia and Iben come up to the summerhouse, everything seems fine. They happily walk down to the beach, and while they are lying and enjoying the sun, Mia and Iben ask Casper and Frank, if they want to go into the water with them, both Casper and Frank answer: "no, because they are not swimming in the extremly cold Danish water". While Iben and Mia, swim alone, Casper and frank take a walk down the beach, and drink some wonderful wine. Suddenly they see the two girls, who they gave a ride. They began talking with them, and the two beautiful young girls then ask the same question as Mia and Iben asked, " Do you want to go swimming with me and my girl friend", and in contrast to before, they now say yes, and after that, they are going in the water with the two girls. They are having a lot of fun in the water, until Frank is so unlucky to hurt his penis, on a stinging jellyfish, and the lifeguard now saves the very pitiable Frank from “drowning”, and while Frank is totally naked and laying on the ground, getting cream on his penis, the girls are looking at it, but like the big “hero” Casper is, he gets them pushed back.
Hmmm må sige, at du skifter lidt i mellem tiderne, hold dig enten til datid eller nutid, dette har jeg ikk koncentreret mig om, ydermere skal du passe på brugen af -ing, da dette ikke bruges så hyppigt som de fleste danskere tror, samtidig, synes jeg at du kunne være lidt mere præcis i dine sætninger, da nogle af dem er lidt kringlede...
Men som skrevet i starten er dette kun mit forslag, der kan sagtens komme andre og rette videre på mit...men held og lykke
In this episode of 'Sommerhuset' Casper, Frank, Mia and Iben are going to a summerhouse, they'll have a nice weekend in the summerhouse, which is near the water, with relaxation and nice comfort. The four youngsters drive in 2 cars; Frank and Casper in their car, and the girls in another. On the way up there, Frank and Casper pick up two beautiful young girls, just to give them a ride, which later turns out to be a bad idea.When Frank, Casper, Mia and Iben come up to the summerhouse, everything seems fine. They happily walk down to the beach, and while they are lying and enjoying the sun, Mia and Iben ask Casper and Frank, if they want to go into the water with them, both Casper and Frank answer: "no, because they are not swimming in the extremly cold Danish water". While Iben and Mia, swim alone, Casper and frank take a walk down the beach, and drink some wonderful wine. Suddenly they see the two girls, who they gave a ride. They began talking with them, and the two beautiful young girls then ask the same question as Mia and Iben asked, " Do you want to go swimming with me and my girl friend", and in contrast to before, they now say yes, and after that, they are going in the water with the two girls. They are having a lot of fun in the water, until Frank is so unlucky to hurt his penis, on a stinging jellyfish, and the lifeguard now saves the very pitiable Frank from “drowning”, and while Frank is totally naked and laying on the ground, getting cream on his penis, the girls are looking at it, but like the big “hero” Casper is, he gets them pushed back.
Hmmm må sige, at du skifter lidt i mellem tiderne, hold dig enten til datid eller nutid, dette har jeg ikk koncentreret mig om, ydermere skal du passe på brugen af -ing, da dette ikke bruges så hyppigt som de fleste danskere tror, samtidig, synes jeg at du kunne være lidt mere præcis i dine sætninger, da nogle af dem er lidt kringlede...
Men som skrevet i starten er dette kun mit forslag, der kan sagtens komme andre og rette videre på mit...men held og lykke
Svar #8
03. april 2006 af figaro8 (Slettet)
takker fordi du gad... ja grunden til at jeg gerne ville have det her stykke rettet, er nemlig også fordi, at der skal beskrives nogle situationer, hvilket jeg ikke er særlig god til på engelsk ..
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