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04. maj 2006 af figaro8 (Slettet)

This text also tells about terrorism, and it relates to the episode in the early September 2004. Because In the southern Russia, in Beslan, were more than thousand people kidnapped and held captive by crazy terrorists, whose only argument were to kill. And that was what happened. The terror in beslan ended with a massive loss of life, and especially children were hid by this attack, because most of the victims were young children. If you look back in the history, you can see, that must of all these terror attacks, have been done by Muslims, and thereby followed a big hate to the Muslims, from the must world. And that’s a big mistake I think, because these terrorists only form a very small part of all Muslims. Moreover we are talking about small children, who has been brainwashed by preachers through all their life, with hate and to die as martyrs . And then they will be developed to terrorist at last.

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Svar #1
04. maj 2006 af Peden (Slettet)

Ja? Hvad er spørgsmålet?
Igen igen kan jeg fortælle at man ikke får det store ud af bare bevidstløst at kræve. Skriv da hvad dine problemer er, så er jeg sikker på at nogen vil svare.

Svar #2
04. maj 2006 af figaro8 (Slettet)

ok jeg vil gerne vide om der er grammatiske fejl i teksten:)

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Svar #3
04. maj 2006 af Lie_Geg (Slettet)

This text also tells ua about terrorism, and it relates to the episode in early September 2004. Because in southern Russia, in Beslan, more than a thousand people were kidnapped and held captived by crazy terrorists, whose only argument were to kill. And that was what happened. The terror in Beslan ended with a massive loss of life, and especially children were hit by this attack, because most of the victims were young children. If you look back in history, you see, that most of these terror attacks, have been done by Muslims, and therefor a big hatred towards the Muslims followed from most of the world. And that’s a big mistake In my opinion, because these terrorists only form a very small part of all Muslims. furthermore, we are talking about small children, who has been brainwashed by preachers through all of their life, with hate and a glorification of diyng as martyrs . And then they will be encouraged to commit terrorism at last.

Noget i den retning:-)

Svar #4
04. maj 2006 af figaro8 (Slettet)

tak

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Svar #5
04. maj 2006 af Jakobmp (Slettet)

Figaro:

Altså, din baggrundsviden er nærmest elendig.
Der er massere af terrorisme i fx Sydamerika og terrorisme i Nordirland. Du kan ikke mønte terrorisme i så høj grad på muslimer.

I øvrigt er opgaver som helhed ikke særlig velskrevet. Visse ord er direkte malplaceret.

Eksempel:
"If you look back in the history, you can see, that must of all these terror attacks, have been done by Muslims, and thereby followed a big hate to the Muslims, from the must world."

- must world? mener ud ikke: most world?

"to the Muslims" - jeg ville skrive: towards the Muslims.

Der er også en del andre ting du bør se på.

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Svar #6
04. maj 2006 af jammal (Slettet)

1)Først skal du vide, at komma i englesk ikke er det samme som på dk. F.eks ALDRIG komma foran 'that'!!

2) Husk: tells (us)

"Moreover we are talking about small children, who has been..." Find fejlen!

"And then they will be developed to terrorist at last."

Jeg vil sige: Eventually they will be developed to terrorists!

Nåå..ellers synes jeg at du skulle kigge på #5..og jeg vil også tilføje at Spanien ( ITA bevægelsen, tror den hedder) har også haft meget med terror at gøre..

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Svar #7
04. maj 2006 af jammal (Slettet)

Jeg er ikke 110% sikker, men tror ikke, at man kan starte en sætning med AND fordi, det er et ord der forbinder noget med noget..Eller tager jeg fejl venner ?

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Svar #8
04. maj 2006 af Jakobmp (Slettet)

6¤
Bevægelsen hedder ETA.
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Man kan lave en diskursanalyse omkring emnet terrorisme. Hvis terrorisme i høj grad, af vestlige medier bl.a., bliver omtalt som et muslimsk foretagende, har det naturligvis effekt på dem, som føler sig belært med disse oplysninger.

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