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Mange fejl?
28. august 2006 af
deniz_g (Slettet)
Hejsa
Jeg er dårlig til engelsk/skriftlig så I ikke blie chokeret over mine fejl. Håber I vil rette de værste fejl :(
mvh denizz
1.
In the middle of a war, a plane with a group of British boys is shot down over a tropical island. They choose John as their leader and finding a way to be rescued. Ralph decides that they must a signal fire that passing ships might see. They begin to planning how they are able to make the smoke signals. The boys begin to make a fire and using John’s eyeglasses. One day, a ship passes by and Ralph and John notice that the signal fire has burned out.
The smoke of the signal fire symbolizes the last hope of the boys being rescued.
2.
Jack loses the first part of the game and Ralph chooses him to go hunting. That was Jacks idea to hunt to survive on an island. Jack and the other boys have some trouble catching a pig. Jack couldn’t kill the pigs because of the knife was not sharp. The only death is a little boy burnt by an accident. Jack job was killing a pig and getting food. Then meaning of the hunt is probably to eat some food. The boys would have starved to death had they not be rescued
Jeg er dårlig til engelsk/skriftlig så I ikke blie chokeret over mine fejl. Håber I vil rette de værste fejl :(
mvh denizz
1.
In the middle of a war, a plane with a group of British boys is shot down over a tropical island. They choose John as their leader and finding a way to be rescued. Ralph decides that they must a signal fire that passing ships might see. They begin to planning how they are able to make the smoke signals. The boys begin to make a fire and using John’s eyeglasses. One day, a ship passes by and Ralph and John notice that the signal fire has burned out.
The smoke of the signal fire symbolizes the last hope of the boys being rescued.
2.
Jack loses the first part of the game and Ralph chooses him to go hunting. That was Jacks idea to hunt to survive on an island. Jack and the other boys have some trouble catching a pig. Jack couldn’t kill the pigs because of the knife was not sharp. The only death is a little boy burnt by an accident. Jack job was killing a pig and getting food. Then meaning of the hunt is probably to eat some food. The boys would have starved to death had they not be rescued
Svar #1
28. august 2006 af mss1307 (Slettet)
Det ser altså ikke så skidt ud. Du skal være opmærksom på ikke at misbruge ing-formen. Fx hedder det "They choose John as their leader and FIND a way to be rescued" - ikke FINDING.
En rettet udgave:
In the middle of a war, a plane with a group of British boys is shot down over a tropical island. They choose John as their leader and find a way to be rescued. Ralph decides that they must make a signal fire that passing ships might see. They begin to plan how to make the smoke signals. The boys begin to make a fire using John’s eyeglasses. One day, a ship passes by and Ralph and John notice that the signal fire has burned out.
The smoke of the signal fire symbolizes the boys' last hope of being rescued.
Jack loses the first part of the game and Ralph chooses him to go hunting. It was Jack's idea to hunt to survive on an island. Jack and the other boys have some trouble catching a pig. Jack couldn’t kill the pigs because the knife was not sharp. The only death is a little boy burnt by an accident. Jack's job was to kill a pig and get food. The meaning of the hunt is probably to eat some food. The boys would have starved to death had they not be rescued
En rettet udgave:
In the middle of a war, a plane with a group of British boys is shot down over a tropical island. They choose John as their leader and find a way to be rescued. Ralph decides that they must make a signal fire that passing ships might see. They begin to plan how to make the smoke signals. The boys begin to make a fire using John’s eyeglasses. One day, a ship passes by and Ralph and John notice that the signal fire has burned out.
The smoke of the signal fire symbolizes the boys' last hope of being rescued.
Jack loses the first part of the game and Ralph chooses him to go hunting. It was Jack's idea to hunt to survive on an island. Jack and the other boys have some trouble catching a pig. Jack couldn’t kill the pigs because the knife was not sharp. The only death is a little boy burnt by an accident. Jack's job was to kill a pig and get food. The meaning of the hunt is probably to eat some food. The boys would have starved to death had they not be rescued
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