gramatiske fejl(hjælp)

Jeg skal aflevere den her imorgen, håber at der er nogen som kan se de fejl jeg har og hjælpe med at rette dem.

When the girl came home she saw that she has forgotten to pick the apples and her mother was very angry at her and punished her by saying that she should stay outside the door all the night. The night came and the girl went outside and sat at the door. It was very cold and she froze a lot. Suddenly a boy came and said “hello my dear” and the girl recognized the voice and it was the guy she met before. He asked the girl why she was sitting at the door opening, and the girl told him that she was punished because she forgot to pick apples cause she was busy talking to him. And he said that he’s sorry and told the girl to follow him to his cave where it was warm. The girl went in the cave and thanks him for brining her to the cave. The talked together and had fun. They got in love and got tired. They slept bough in the cave. The next morning when they woke up the girl got into panic and was very scared of that her family knew where she was. When he came home the family was waiting for her and asked her where she was. The girl said the she was just around the corner and slept there because it was to cold at the door opening. Her family didn’t believe her and said that she has been somewhere else and that they would find the person that she has been with the night over. The family made a plan. The plan was that they would send the girl to pick and someone should hide himself there and watch for the person she was communicating with. The girl went to pick apples the guy came and said “why did you just go away without saying goodbye”. The guy who was hiding jumped forward and grabbed the boy and kidnapped him. The girl began to cry and said “please don’t kill him, please!” The family discussed about what to do with the boy came on to that they should hang him tomorrow. They sat the boy in their basement and locked the door. When the girl saw that no one was guarding the basement she went down and found the key opened the door and said to the boy “let’s get out of here”. When they got out they planed to escape on a horse. They ran over to the horses and someone said “stop right there!” it was the girls father but they didn’t stop and kept running. They got on a horse and rode away. They had nowhere to live now and didn’t know anyone outside the village. The rode until they found a farm. When they got into the farm there was none and it was abandoned. They decided that they would live here. And They lived to their day’s end.

-Tusind tak