Hurtig rettelse a Engelsk A niveau stil

Nogle som gider tjekke den her gennem for de væreste fejl, eller mere "sproglige konstruktioner", for der skulle helst ikke være nogle fejl som sådan:


War is a conflict involving use of weapons and physical force by states or other larger “organizations”, often caused by a lack of dialogue between the parties. However, war does not only affect the participants of the war, like the military army and the state. But it especially touches upon the civilians and the inhabitants of the country. They are the ones who loses their dear ones, the ones who need to accustome to the limted recourses during war and they are the ones who will never know what is going to happen next. Terms as heaviness, sadness are always lurking just below the surface in the human psyche. It is perhaps impossible to quantify war's effects on the human psyche, yet that effect is real. Though many people decribes it as a scar, that will eventually heal but never disappear. The effects on the human mind caused by war, is one of the central themes of Elizabeth Bowen’s “The Demon Lover”, from 1945. The title refers to a love-affaire from the past that keeps on haunting you. In “The Demon Lover”, Mrs Drover, returns to her London home, which had been vacated during the bombing of the city by Germany.

The story begins on a humid day. And due to the showery day, there was still stress in the air and as Mrs. Drover got closer to the house, the street covered with dark ink-clouds. She is keenly aware of her surroundings: the atmosphere, weather, and particularly, a sense of strangeness. As Mrs Drover, the protagonist, walks toward her London house: an unfamiliar queerness had silted up. (efdf) The author's use of the word "queerness" puts the reader on guard for something out of the ordinary. Indeed, it is clear that Mrs Dover consists of the very same tension as the weather. She is going there to confront with the house that she had left since war has started; in some other sense she is going to face herself to understand what kind of damage the war has caused, not only to the house, but to herself.

When Mrs Dover reaches the house, a sudden connection and personification of the house and the conscious is being accentuated. When she tries to open the door, the key lock is quite stiff, so she is having resistance when trying to enter her consciousness. When she opens the door a steam of “dead air” from the unvisited house rushes towards her, like her memories have not been explored for years. Mrs Drover now steps inside to confront her past, and all bad and suppressed memories and traumas. The house is clearly marked by the war. And as well as the house, Mrs Dover has suf-fered from the aerial bombardment that took over London during the war. And the house is now ruined, and it has eroded the house's stability, just as the constant pressure of the war has worn on Mrs. Drover's psyche. Inside the china handle, had left a bruise on the wall, just like Mrs Drovers’ psyche had been scarred. The windows of the house have blocked, so everything had been distanced even further, because one could not just look into the house on special occasions. She sees that marble mantelpiece has turned to yellow; losing its beautiful whiteness and brightness; it is matte now. Once it used to be white and its function was warm up the house, but it is useless now. This symbolizes the tranquillity which is erased from Mrs. Drovers psyche. Now: she is more perplexed than she knew. Due to everything she saw by these traces of her former life (gfhfd).