Engelsk

Grammatiske fejl?

15. marts 2007 af Eagle-Eye (Slettet)
Kan I finde nogle grammatiske fejl, i denne tekst?

"Technological evolution has come far – especially during the last few decades. For instance, in Sweden, technology has made it possible for Swedish engineers to make a full-automatic car, which does exactly what you command it to do. This obvious technological evolution is to be seen in nearly every country, with some technological baggage.
One of those countries (with technological baggage), is Japan.
For the past two decades, Japan has been the leading country when it comes to improvements and making of industrial robots. Japanese engineers are obsessed with making the robots as human as possible – or making them humanoid. They’re now working on some robots that - perhaps - are going to replace the real human being form their posts. If the technological evolution allows it, the social workers, will probably be replaces by these robots. "

Mange tak for hjælpen i øvrigt.

Svar #1
15. marts 2007 af Eagle-Eye (Slettet)

Nogle?

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Svar #2
15. marts 2007 af Katrine (Slettet)

Der er fejl i dette her:

They’re now working on some robots that - perhaps - are going to replace the real human being form their posts.

1) Undgå sammentrækninger
2) du mangler et ord eller noget mellem human being form og their posts.

Ooog..

If the technological evolution allows it, the social workers, will probably be replaces by these robots. "

1) Slet komma efter workers
2) replaces skal bøjes i en anden tid.

Svar #3
18. marts 2007 af Eagle-Eye (Slettet)

Tak,
Fejlene var stavefejl - dem rettede jeg efter gennemlæsning.
Kommafejlene har jeg ikke kunne gennemskue.

Svar #4
18. marts 2007 af Eagle-Eye (Slettet)

Forresten,

Kan ikke finde ud af, hvor jeg skal placere "partly" i denne sætning:

"The reason for this obsession partly is the Japanese culture and also their “ancient” traditions".

Nogen der ved det, så det bliver grammatisk korrekt?

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Svar #5
18. marts 2007 af Katrine (Slettet)

..is partly the Japanese culture, partly their ancient..

Svar #6
18. marts 2007 af Eagle-Eye (Slettet)

Hvordan siger jeg:

"Jeg tror også, at hvis det mod forventing skulle ske"


I also think that, if in contrary to expectation "et eller andet"

Hjælp!

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Svar #7
19. marts 2007 af Katrine (Slettet)

et eller andet = it should happen. ;-)

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