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13. juni 2007 af
Mussy06 (Slettet)
In many cases?/chances?/ coincidences(tilfælde, ved ik hvad der passer bedst) you are normally very confused and in doubt about is it the right to do (skal stå stærkt I tvivl om det det rigtige at gøre)
If you are trying to kill yourself are you normally in that plot where you don’t know which of these two situations you most wanted to die or to live but often is the decision in the (tilfælde overladt til at blive fundet I tide?)
Are there many who commit suicide?
Through the last 20years is the number of suicide (halveret?) but if we compare out number with other Europe countries it showes that they have fewer suicides than Denmark. (der dør lige så mange ved selvmord som ved trafikulykker)
Who commits suicide?
Suicide is 2-3 times frequenter among (<blandt?) men than women.
However is attempted suicide frequenter among women than men. I just want to add that some women misuse the word “suicide” because when they are very unwell some of them will say that they will commit suicide. But back to the subject ! Suicide is also frequenter in the city than in the countries (landet?? På landet??)
And last it’s also frequenter among the poor people than the rich people.
Why do old people commit suicide?
It’s because of isolation and some changes in their family plus economy problems and social conditions it’s some of the reasons to why older people commit suicide.
But normally they do (forholdsvis tager mange ældre livet af sig selv). The reason here is maybe that many of them become scared, become depressed and then have smaller (mindre?) power of resistance (modstandskraft?) for that which influences their mood and (kræfter?)
The age is also the period where you are influenced by isolation or when you miss important persons from your life. It’s hard and difficult to accept an existence which influenced by a (helbredsmæssig), physical and mental (tilbagegang?)
//Det der er skrevet i parantes er self. de ord jeg ikke kan, og som jeg heller ik ku finde i ordbogen :S
If you are trying to kill yourself are you normally in that plot where you don’t know which of these two situations you most wanted to die or to live but often is the decision in the (tilfælde overladt til at blive fundet I tide?)
Are there many who commit suicide?
Through the last 20years is the number of suicide (halveret?) but if we compare out number with other Europe countries it showes that they have fewer suicides than Denmark. (der dør lige så mange ved selvmord som ved trafikulykker)
Who commits suicide?
Suicide is 2-3 times frequenter among (<blandt?) men than women.
However is attempted suicide frequenter among women than men. I just want to add that some women misuse the word “suicide” because when they are very unwell some of them will say that they will commit suicide. But back to the subject ! Suicide is also frequenter in the city than in the countries (landet?? På landet??)
And last it’s also frequenter among the poor people than the rich people.
Why do old people commit suicide?
It’s because of isolation and some changes in their family plus economy problems and social conditions it’s some of the reasons to why older people commit suicide.
But normally they do (forholdsvis tager mange ældre livet af sig selv). The reason here is maybe that many of them become scared, become depressed and then have smaller (mindre?) power of resistance (modstandskraft?) for that which influences their mood and (kræfter?)
The age is also the period where you are influenced by isolation or when you miss important persons from your life. It’s hard and difficult to accept an existence which influenced by a (helbredsmæssig), physical and mental (tilbagegang?)
//Det der er skrevet i parantes er self. de ord jeg ikke kan, og som jeg heller ik ku finde i ordbogen :S
Svar #4
13. juni 2007 af Mussy06 (Slettet)
Nej det er en del fra en aflevering.
Men der er self. grammatik fejl osv. Så om nogle ville rette det hele igennem?
Men der er self. grammatik fejl osv. Så om nogle ville rette det hele igennem?
Svar #8
13. juni 2007 af virious (Slettet)
Okay.. send det til min mail [email protected]
så tjekker jeg lige det værste.
så tjekker jeg lige det værste.
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