Retning af abstract

Hej jeg er efterhånden færdig med min opgave, men tilbage står abstractet. Det har voldt mig en del problemer, og det kunne derfor være dejligt hvis nogle gad kigge det igennem og komme med forbedringer/kritik.
Og som sagt ret endelig! Vil hellere høre det nu, en af læren senere. Her er det:

Abstract
The assignment is a cross-disciplinary assignment in mathematics and history.
The aim of the assignment is to describe the Egyptians culture, hierarchy, and economy in the period 4000-2000 BC. The aim is also what the enclosed sources tell about the society in general, and not just about the mathematician. The purpose in the mathematical section is to investigate the Egyptians methods and use of mathematic.
This assignment concerns the ancient Egypt and the fact that they understood the basic concepts of algebra, geometric, and they could even solve simple sets of equations. To understand the Egyptians methods it is necessary to set up several examples because calculation with letters were to abstract for them.
The Egyptians who were able to understand the mathematics were of high rank in the Egypt society. This creates a picture of Egypt as a land which had a hierarchy. The hierarchy was important for the king to maintain a united Egypt. The mathematicians’ job was to centralize the power and control the commodities the king imported.

På forhånd tak:)