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It was the 29th of November the night before 30th of November, 1990. That
night became unforgettable for everyone. I was supposed to fly to Singapore, but the flight crashed down. The weather was, with heavy rain and thunderstorm. My aeroplane was not easy to steer. The aeroplane had the control over me as it was swaying around totally out of control.
Suddenly I lost the control over the aeroplane, and there was fire in the motor and the aeroplane was about to crash down somewhere that looked like to be a country. I panicked and said through the loudspeaker: “hold on people". I don’t remember how the aeroplane crashed, because it all happened so quickly. I woke up, after one or two hours. It's a miracle that I survived. I lay there maybe for a couple of days, I couldn't remember what day it was. I looked around and couldn’t find my aeroplane. My aeroplane was away and where were all the passengers. I looked around again and found myself along.
Then I saw a man, he came closer and closer. I was scared, but suddenly he took my hand and told me he had survive the crash. I was very surprised and tired. I barely couldn’t feel my feet. He told me that there had been a life team for fetch all the passengers, but they could Only find 24 in live. This man I told with was walked again and then I’m was along again.
Even if I couldn't feel my feet, I forced myself to stand up and walk, I walk into a town, there wasn’t people. I don’t know what I have to should do with myself. I walked down at street to find a hotel or something’s other thing. Then I have walked in many hours, I finally find a little house, there I could sleep for to night.
Then I was coming into a room, where I could sleep, walked I to the bet, because I was very tired.
The next morning when I woke up, there was a policeman at my room. He told me, I should go with him. I don’t remember, what I did, but many hours later, I find myself at the police station. I looked around and was scared, because I didn’t know what I had to do there and what happened since I came to the station. A policeman came to me and said that he could drove me home. I said that it was kind of him, so I went with him. We had been driving for two days and then I was finally home. I was very happy to come home, but what was happened to my aeroplane and all of the passengers, I don’t want to think about. I just want to go to bed, and then I find out of the tomorrow.


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