Er der grammstisk fejl ?

Er der grammstisk fejl eller uforståelige sætninger må i meget gerne sig til. :)


What is/are the message(s) of the article?
The message of the article is that people have to think about their act for other people with not very sure of oneself. We make people make these horrible things, because they don’t have anybody to support them. They need their parents to tell them what’s right or wrong. School shooting is very up to date, therefore we have to lend a hand to these people and let them be one of us. What I mean is that we have to talk easy and be friendly with them. We don’t have to talk negatively about them; in return we have to be open and ready if they need help. And the parents have to do the same things to save their children. They give an example in the article; about a boy, named Williams. His “friends” talked about how badly he had been treated, how the bullies stole his skateboard, stole even the shoes off his feet. And his parents were of course (don’t?) care with him. One night he was drunk, and he decided to take a gun to school and shoot the place up. Then he told his friends about it. The police came to take him away, and no one heard him say anything about being sorry or heard him ask for anyone, not even his mom or dad. That’s mean, that he is lonely. For that reason, he could take his live and shoot everyone who annoyed him in school. He has nothing to lose, not even the family or friends. If people stop exasperated and gang up on somebody, I really think that people will be fine or better than now. We just have to support weak and lonely people. If we don’t do this, we have to expect that these people maybe one day would thread to do a Columbine or other dangerously acts.