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Introduction

What is wrong with doping? If so many athletes is using this illegal way to victory, then we should make it legal, or should we? This topic is very interesting in its way it has become a well known phenomenon/word among many ordinary people. The relevance for this topic is found in the quite recently Tour de France. In 2006 Floyd Landis, the winner, was found guilty in use of illegal supplements and his title was taken away. So the winner was therefore Óscar Pereiro. Advantage of illegal supplement is not at all a new phenomenon in professional cycling. There have been allegations of doping in Tour de France since the race began in 1903. At that time did the tour riders consume alcohol, among other substances, as a means of dulling the pain of competing in endurance cycling. Later on when the pharmaceutical industry was feeding the market with a various kind of new illegal supplements, did many tour riders see an option. Not only for something cool and fancy, but also an easy way to victory. "It existed, it has always existed," said the French reporter and author, Pierre Chany, who followed 49 Tours before his death in 1996. In the late 90’es did the evil doping monster for real showed its face. Scandal after scandal was in the media’s headlines.

Problem statement
In my problem statement I will try to cover some of the basics questions around doping. As future mentioned does a lot of ordinary people know the word doping, but what is doping really? Is there a particular group that uses doping? Why do they use doping?

Conclusion
Doping is an unfamiliar drug in the human organism that is forbidden according to WADA’S list that contains all illegal supplements. The use of some of these supplements, or the presence of those supplements in either urine- or blood sample. And use of methods to change the analysis results in a urine- or blood sample is forbidden. Doping is not only forbidden drugs that enter the human organism in some sort of way. Doping can also be a procedure that blurs the use of illegal drugs and other working methods that in its own can have a performance improvement effect. A forbidden working method is when you don’t direct use any forbidden drugs, but still achieves artificial improvement of the body’s performance capacity and competitiveness. It could for an example be blood doping.
There are many different reasons why people start doing doping. And either is there a clear profile typical doping- abuser. Doping is visible in every social class and among both sex and all ages. But typically it’s spotted among men’s that frequently is among the uses of exercise- and fitness centre, racing cyclists or athletes. In those disciplines there is a big demand on strength. It’s still possible to figure out some reasons that apparently are common among a large group of the users that has admitted their use of forbidden supplement trough out the last years.