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Grammatik

26. august 2008 af H89M (Slettet)

 Hej. 

Det ville være fantastisk, hvis nogle lige ville skimte min engelsk tekst, og rette, hvis der var nogle kæmpe grammatiske fejl. Ligger nemlig syg her hjemme, så jeg kan ikke rigtig få min kammerater til at rette den. 

Håber der er nogle der vil. :)


American life

In Madonna’s song, is she telling about how she is living the American dream, and that she love this way of living. Madonna is a person, who has succeeding the way of living the American dream. She had become a world known pop singer-songwriter, and her life is the perfect explanation of how the American dream are being effete.
The American dream is belief in the freedom that allows all citizens and residents of the United States to achieve their goals in life through hard work.
If we look at Madonna’s earlier life, is her personal development great. In 1977 moved Madonna to New York City, to pursue a career as a ballet dancer. She came to New York with little money, and for some time she worked in Dunkin’ Donuts to earn some money. Her first relation to the music came, when she met at a musician, who she felt in love with, and whom she later formed her first rock band in New York. Since then, Madonna has been world known for her song writing, acting and dancing, trough hard work from the beginning of her career. Madonna has believed in freedom, and achieved her goal in life trough hard work.
Her song, American life, is she telling about the How she loves the American dream. She is writing about how she is trying to do things, which can help her to be a star.
That relates to the American dream, because I show, that it is not easy to reach a goal in life, without hard work, as the American dream also tells us.
Later in the song she is telling about the way she is living now. And we are getting an impression of the sweet life she I living, and after she has told us, that her sweet life is because she is living the American Dream, are we getting a positive impression of her way of living. And her refrain also tells us about her opinion: The American dream is like a dream. The song also resists the unreliability of choosing this way of living. That brings up questions about how to make the American dream come true.




 


Brugbart svar (1)

Svar #1
26. august 2008 af danielruhmann (Slettet)

Inden jeg kommer med en rettelse, ville det være fint, hvis du selv prøvede at rette følgende ting:

Overensstemmelse mellem subjekt og verbum. explanation of how the American dream are being effete

Ordstilling: In Madonna’s song, is she telling about . Disse fejl er der en del af.

Retter du to ovennævnte ting så godt, som du formår, skal jeg nok give dig en rettelse.


Svar #2
26. august 2008 af H89M (Slettet)

 Altså mener du sådan her?:

Explanation of how the American dream is being effete.

In Madonna's song, she is telling about / eller kan man sige: In Madonna's song, she tells about?..
 


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