Grammatiske fejl (oversættelse)

Hej. Er der nogen der kan rette de grammatiske fejl i disse to, forholdsvis korte, oversættelser :)..

Tak på forhånd :)

B (s.35):
Jamie would like his friends to look up to him. He didn’t have anything against doing dangerous things if just the other boys would admire him for what he does. In all situation Jamie was the boy, who knew what he had to do, and how he had to do it. He enjoyed the feeling of being superior, and was used to be obeyed. In an age of 11, Jamie expected everyone would comply after his orders. But Jamie was very immature and suddenly some of the other boys stopped visiting him, without any explanation. Gradually some of the other boys also stopped, and Jamie had to go through some difficult years before he got mature enough to stop playing a hero.
 

C (s.41):
An angry younger lady required to talk with the manager of the company. She found it very improper, that the staff in the business didn’t pass their jobs. Several saleswomens talked in the phone, so the costumers had to wait. The manager was sorry, if the mentioned saleswomens didn’t have time for the costumers, but the last two weeks have been the busiest ever. The company’s commercial campaign has been a success, and many costumers called to order the advertised products. But of course he would as a manager take care of the concerned problems. “Satisfied costumers are our biggest active,” he concluded. “May I therefore give you this bottle of wine from our company as a minor compensates for the insufficient service?”