Hvordan siger man? HURTIG HJÆLP

She hugged him

kan man sige : she cuddled him?

det er vist mere at omfavne

hvordan siger man

Den hvide farve symboliserer min uskyld og den trofasthed jeg har vist dig

Mit bud ville være..:

The white colour symbolizes my innocence and the loyalty I have shown you

ja det ville jeg også sige

Tak for den store hjælp..

jeg har skrevet lidt nu, men er ikke sikker

At Seventy-third Street he stopped and turned right. He walked into the alley even though it was getting a little darker. He walked further down the street. Two blocks down he saw Norma coming closer. He laid the flowers on the ground. He reached into his coat pocket and touched his knife. He squeezed around it and smiled to Norma when she came closer. She smiled back and tried to fix her makeup and cloth. “Sorry, I´m late. I just had to visit Allen,” she muttered. She cuddled him softly. “Norma,” he whispered into her ears and pulled his knife out of his coat pocket. “I have a present for you,” he giggled. Quickly he took around Norma and stabbed his knife into her stomach. She screamed. He stabbed her over and over again while he shushed on her. “I know why you visited Allen. I simply can’t take it anymore,” he whispered in a angry tone of voice. Norma laid crumpled on the ground. She was white as a sheet. She couldn’t talk because of her pain. He sat down beside her. He fetched the flowers and unpacked them slowly. He looked at her and smiled. Then he said : “The red flowers symbolize my big love for you. The white flowers symbolize my innocence and loyalty I have shown you.” Norma cried and whispered: “I didn’t know you were so serious about us. I just needed to…” She couldn’t say more. She tried so hard. He came closer to Norma, took his knife and screamed intensive : “But the yellow color symbolizes your cheating and failure against me.” He got up and took his knife. “You have ruined my life and I can’t stand your cheating anymore”, he said numb. He stabbed her in her chest. He did it again. She died. The young man went back to Seventy-third Street and he just smiled.

kan ikke selv finde flere fejl, nogle der vil læse den igennem ?

Tak på forhånd

:D

Gå ind på google.dk ved siden af søge feltet er der noget der hedder sprogværktøjer, så kan du kopier det du har skrevet og oversætte til dansk så kan du se om der er nogle fejl.

og hvis der er et dansk ord/sætning du ikke kan stave på engelsk så kan du også bruge den..