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Hej. Please. Er der nogen som gider rette min engelsk tale for sprogfejl osv. TAK!!!:)

18. februar 2009 af kovalchukr (Slettet)

<span lang="EN-GB" style="font-size: 16.0pt;mso-bidi-font-size:12.0pt;line-height:150%;mso-ansi-language:EN-GB">Fitness or not?</o:p>

<span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-GB">In the past 10 years, there have been a large number of people, who joined the fitness mania. You can ask your self why? There is a very simple reason for that. First of all the business market has grown up to a large size, and a lot of people are working from 8<span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 16.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family: Courier;mso-ansi-language:EN-GB"> at the morning, to 6 at the evening. Another reason could be the women’s, who is a big part of the business market today. The big probleme in this theme, is time and profits. A lot of people are today very stresses because their jobs are very demanding. After work are they properly tired and don’t have profit for going to a sport. Fx soccer or an another hard working sport, that needs to be planed and goes after schedule. Instead they go to these fitness manias for making some fitness. These fitness manias is a kind of a back up, so when they come home, they can make some fitness, and the good thing with this fitness manias, is that you not are going to plan when you are going there, you make your own schedule of exercise. They are always open form early morning to late afternoon, and they can offer almost any kind of training you are interested in. It’s just your time and surplus it’s depending on. My impression is, that the public is using these offers. The society gets the opportunity to make some fitness after work or in the morning before work. The solution of having open in the morning and in the evening is very usefully. A lot of the society, work in the middle of the day, and do not have time for making some fitness at the day. Especially the business minded people, which are working from the morning to the evening. They do not have time to go to a sport like soccer, because it’s need a plan and goes after a schedule. That’s why you also see, a lot middle age people and people in the 30 to the 40 go in these fitness manias. </o:p>

<span lang="EN-GB" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 16.0pt;line-height:150%;font-family:"Times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family: Courier;mso-ansi-language:EN-GB">We just have to keep on the good working, so we helps the society getting healthy. That’s better then a society which are unhealthy. </o:p>

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Svar #1
18. februar 2009 af MiiMo5 (Slettet)

In the past 10 years, there have been a large number of people, who have joined the fitness mania. You can ask yourself why? There is a very simple reason for that. First of all, the business market has grown up to a large size, and a lot of people are working from 8 at the morning till 6 in the evening. Another reason could be the women, who are a big part of the business market today. The big problem in this theme is time and profits. A lot of people are today very stressed because their jobs are very demanding. After work they are properly tired and don’t have profit for going to a sport. e.g. soccer or another hard working sport, that needs to be planned and goes after schedule. Instead they go to these fitness manias for making some fitness. These fitness manias are a kind of a back up, so when they come home, they can make some fitness, and the good thing with this fitness manias is that you not are going to plan when you are going there, you make your own schedule of exercise. They are always open from early morning to late afternoon, and they can offer almost any kind of training you are interested in. It’s just your time and surplus it depends on. My impression is that the public is using these offers. The society gets the opportunity to make some fitness after work or in the morning before work. The solution of having open in the morning and in the evening is very useful. Most of the society work in the middle of the day, and do not have time for making some fitness at the day. Especially business people, who are working from the morning to the evening. They do not have time to go to a sport like soccer, because it needs a plan and goes after a schedule. That’s why you also see a lot of middle-aged people and people in the 30 to the 40 go in these fitness manias.

We just have to keep on the good working, so we help the society getting healthy. That’s better than a society thats unhealthy.


Svar #2
18. februar 2009 af kovalchukr (Slettet)

tusind tak


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