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Man siger egentlig: Once upon a time, long time ago, men da "time" nævnes to gange bruger man hellere: Once upon a time, long ago

Der var engang for lang tid siden en venlig irsk heks der mødtes med en beundret forfatter to gange om ugen for at fortælle ham historier som han kunne nedskrive og udgive som sine egne.

hvordan vil den så komme til at lyde?

Once upon a time a friendly Irish witch met a popular writer twice a week to tell him stories which he could write down and publish as his own.

Once upon a time long ago there was a friendly Irish witch who twice a week met with an admired writer to tell him stories that he could write down and publish as his own. For every meeting the writer baked some delicious bread which he became very admired for by all his friends. The witch who was Irish would rather has had a beer but she felt that when she was guest she had to behave friendly.
Then one day it got too much for the witch. She was telling a story about a bear which she thought was really good and a good chance to tell people that beers was even better than freshly baked buns. Suddenly the writer got scared and ran away. The witch thought it was so depressing that she wrote a letter where she accused the writer for being an untalented fool. Afterwards they never saw each other again. At last the writers career stopped and the witch was depressed the rest of her life because she had so many great stories she never got told.

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