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Engelsk stil 350 ord bare lidt støtte afleveres imorgen 8 kl niveua
Vi bare en ville rette de værste gramme fejl og stavelser så ville jeg være dybt taknemmelig
Forest secrets
The clock was 9.15 , and all my classmates talk about the trip to the woods, plan is to run at 10, but it is postponed for half an hour. because our teacher had forgotten to take his tent with. we should not soon to leave and I asked my friend per. and at the same moment, I see that our teacher lief comes regularly with his tent. Now we are in a briskly at Lief in front.we got a lollipop on the way as leif age 49 years, we were now 15 km and was now and be in Rold forest me and per and jørgen should sleeping in one tent as jørgen had taken whit, Now we should have turned our tent up, jørgen took command and went on to go wrong so we had to wait for our teacher and lief.
we belive final finished a couple of timers later, and tonight we had agreed with leif we were on the nights in the woods. before we started the trip leif explained how important it was that we were not away from each other.
we started with and go and enjoy talking while we walked in the woods, but me, per jørgen and went back, we discovered that it was something that glimtede 500 meters down, we informed us about it and we would go and look, we ran and see what it was and it was just a key, but we took it up and kigede us around and found out we were all alone, and we started shouting after the other but we got no reply. we løbeede around and look for them but we were as pallet alone in the world, we could just not find them. we kigede after them for several hours without any result, we sat and talked now and surprised us with what the key was used, jørgen lost the key landed horizontally into the ground and a large flashes came, the forest åbenede for us suddenly the trees came into the bed and leaves as a duvet, it was fantastic, like a dream that was alive. we experienced the most incredible thing at night, we woke up there were put in some apples and honey which was fresh and fresh blueberries
like lightning disappeared key and everything was normal again and an hour after we found our class, but nobody would believe us
Svar #2
23. april 2009 af Nillerman (Slettet)
Jeg beder om hjælp, kom nu og jeg ville være dybt taknemmelig
Svar #3
23. april 2009 af poppen (Slettet)
er der ingen der kan hjælpe ham / hende ?:D jeg er ikke selv god til engelsk.. men sys det er lidt syndt hahah!
men nillerman har ikke læst din stil men skriver du i nutid elelr datid?
Svar #4
23. april 2009 af Nillerman (Slettet)
lidt af hvert tror jeg, hehe . jeg er lost når ingen ville hjælpe mig,
Svar #5
23. april 2009 af Njaa (Slettet)
Det er ikke alt du har skrevet jeg forstår. Jeg har skrevet spørgsmålstegn ved steder jeg ikke helt forstår, så sørg for at læse det grundigt igennem.
It was 09:15 (a.m.?) , and all my classmates talked about the trip to the woods. The plan was to run (go?) at 10 (a.m.?), but it got adjourned for half an hour, because our teacher had forgotten to bring his tent. "Are we going to leave soon?" I asked my firend Per (er det det, du vil skrive?), and at the same moment, I see that our teacher Leif comes regularly (?) with his tent. Now we are in a briskly (?) at Leif in front. Leif, who was 49 years old, gave us a lollipop on the way. We had now driven the 15 kilometres and had arrived to Rold forest. Jørgen, Per and I was going to sleep in one tent, which Jørgen had brung along. Now we should put up our tent. Jørgen took command and did it all wrong so we had to wait for our teacher and Leif.
A couple of hours later, we fianlly finished putting up our tent, and this night we had agreed with Leif that we were going to be in the woods for the night. Before we started the trip, Leif explained how important it was that we were not away from each other.
We started walking and enjoyed talking while we were walking in the woods, but when Per, Jørgen and I went back, we discovered that something sparkled 500 meters down. We informed us about it (?) and we would go take a look. We ran towards the sparkling item and saw what it was. It was just a key. But we picked it up and had a look around and found out we were all alone. Then we started calling the others, but we got no reply. We ran around and looked for them, but we were all alone. We really could n't find them! We looked for them for several hours without any result. We sat down and talked and
(jeg er ikke helt sikker på hvad du mener i dette stykke, men måske: "and suddenly Jørgen tripped, landed horizontally to the ground and a large flash flew from the key," )
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surprised us with what the key was used, jørgen lost the key landed horizontally into the ground and a large flashes came,
the forest opened itself to us. Suddenly the trees came into the bed and the leaves laid down as a duvet, it was fantastic, like a dream that was alive. We experienced the most incredible things at night. We woke up, there were some apples and fresh honey and blueberries.
With lightning speed, the key disappeared and everything was back to normal. An hour later we found our class, but nobody would believe our story.
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