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 I have the pleasure to inform you, how much I (am) was inspired by your work ?????, when I read an article about your firm in (The Sunday Times). About how it all began and all (that) the (heard) hard work that you have put(t) (on) into the firm. I can see that you are a great student of business. I am inspired and (welling) willing to learn. I think that the East End Foods is an exciting company and I am sure that I would learn a lot from it if I could get the opportunity (for it).

Therefore I am addressing (too) you to became trainee in your firm(. I am looking for a one-year stay as a trainee in the company. T) to learn and increase my knowledge, about entrepreneurship. (Ved du hvad entrep. betyder ??)
I always believed that  (in) to (get) succeed in (your) life you must have goals. Goals are the way to success(es). Therefore, it is my goal to get as ?????  a trainee in your firm and increase my knowledge, I am a very ambitious person and I always work hard to achieve my goals.

(Staying) Working  in your company will help give me with a better understanding of the detailed ????   business world(. A) and help me to determine the key element of a company or a complex issue ???????   with high speed and precision. My willingness to learn and adapt is major ?????. I hope that you will accept me as trainee and are wiling to be me mentor.

I am 23-years old and at the moment I (am living) live in Copenhagen. I (am) study(ing) economy at Copenhagen University. As part of economic perspective, I have a stable knowledge  ??????  . I want to start (me) my own company, I have a copal’s project  ?????  going on (ret) right now. I am positive that my stay at East End Foods can help me (too) to(performs) realise  my projects. 

........Jeg ville aldrig antage en som skrev sådan til mig i et firma. Det brev er alt for barnligt og det oser af en umoden pralen og en urealistisk selvovervurdering, -bortset fra at det engelske er alt for dårligt.

Det er næsten en pinlig skrivelse. Man genkender også din holdning i den måde du formulerer din indledning her på siden på. Det er næsten en kommando. Sådan beder man ikke andre om noget  !!!! 

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