er der en der kan tjekke grammatikken?

22. oktober 2009 af lyngby bk (Slettet) - Niveau: 9. klasse

ret grammatikken? please

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22. oktober 2009 af lyngby bk (Slettet)

 Hey Amy, How are you? I’m so glad to hear you are changing school in September. You took the right election.
As we wrote together on the website “Netlog”, I felt a special feeling, maybe because you are the sweetest girl, and of cause the most beautiful creature I known. If I should find a word there describing you best, I would choose Perfect. Anyway, my school “Trongårdsskolen” had the location in the city Lyngby on Trongårdsvej 50. We are about 600 pupils in nine different grades. I study in ninth grade. We are 19 pupils in my own class, and it’s not very many. I will show our schedule in a normal week:
Monday: PI 8:00-9.30 am, Danish 9:55-11:25 am, Math 12:00-1:30 pm.
Thursday: CSPE 8:00-8:45 am, Hour of the class 8:45-9:30 am, Dutch/French 9:55- 11:25 am, Physic/Chemistry 12:00-1:30 pm.
Wednesday: Biology 8:00-8:45 am, Physic/Chemistry 8:45-9:30, Danish 9:55-11:25 AM, Geographic 12:00-12:45, History 12:45-1:30 pm.
Tuesday: Christianity 8:00-8:45 am, Danish 8:45-9:30, English 9:55-11:25, Drama/media 12:00-1:30 pm.
Friday: Math 8:00-9:30 am, Dutch/French 9:55-11:25 am, English 12:00-12:45 pm.
Saturday: Holiday
Sunday: Holiday.
Traditions: We have a tradition at the end of the year, all the pupils from ninth grade is dressing up in funny or naughty costumes and throw caramels, so I like when the girls is dressing naughty in bikini, it looks nicely, when you can see their sexy body. Later we nominate some pupils from the other grades, one of the nominations is example “couple of the year”. We are acting on the School square, some of the girls are singing, some of the boys are teasing for teachers with some music in the background. Finally seem to be a water fight between pupils and teachers. This Tradition has existed for years.
Rules: We have some rules; “no running on the School halls”, I think it’s a useless rule, because any fulfills it. The most normal rule are “No smoking in the school class”, it’s a health rule. “No stealing”. Ultimately “You shall wear some cloths”.
Dress code: You can wear your own cloths in this magnificent school. You can punk, Pop, Fashion or other styles. I prefer the Pop style. It’s a shape of freedom, and you can be yourself. Nobody are the same.
Homework: we didn’t have a lot of homework in my class, but sometimes we have to write a task in Danish, English, Dutch and French. Really we shall make an issue expense for next week in Math. The most of my Classmates think it would help with more homework, to get a greater knowledge. But In the reality we didn’t learn enough, when we are making the cruel homework.
Here are the names of my teachers:
Bent Poulsen Aka The god. He is my English and History teacher. I like his teaching methods, it becomes not to boring or to humorous in his lessons. It’s an extraordinary balance.
Michael Nielsen/The librarian. Michael is my Danish, PI and Christianity teacher.
Jan/The expert Within Math. Jan is my Math and Geographic teacher.
Fin Salling. He is a fantastic teacher. Fin teaching me in Physic/Chemistry, Biology.

It was all for today, I’m looking forward to your changing honey. Bye bye..Kisses from me to you.

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