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In ”Smoke” we meet Auggie Wren. Auggie owns his own little shop in what I think is the down town of the city. I don’t think that he owns a lot of money, just enough so he can survive with the shop, and have a small saving account. He is a strange and weird person, who at the first looked a little selfish. He have spent up 5000$ which he should use of some kind of project. The shop that Auggie owns is a little cigar and liquor shop where he is every day from the morning to the evening. Every week the same people come and buy the same things, and I think that some of them are using the shop for some kind of a protection spot.
The 5000$ he have saved up, would he use for buying some illegally imported cigars, but it fails because the cigars were being wet. It was his assistant who done that and he paid Auggie the 5000$ back for the spoiled cigars. But Auggie didn’t want to keep the money so he gives it to his ex. Girlfriend, because that she needs them more than he does. At that time I don’t look at Auggie at the same way, I don’t see him so selfish anymore, but more as a man of honour.
Auggie has a strange hobby he takes pictures from the same spot at the same time, day in and day out. He have a strange story of how he got his camera because it isn’t his, it’s a stolen one.
A young boy steeled a book in his shop and Auggie finds his wallet with his address. Auggie goes to the address hoping that he finds the shoplifter, but instead he finds the shoplifters grandmother.
The Grandmother thinks that Auggie is her grandson because she is old and blind, so because of Auggie don’t have no plans for Christmas he acts so. I think that’s a very honestly thing to do. He spends his Christmas Eve with an old lady, he doesn’t know. And he makes the evening great for the old lady that we later hear was her last Christmas. He did all that without thinking of himself, and therefore I think that he is a very honourably man.
He steels the camera from the old lady’s apartment where there was a lot of them. I would not take for a very hard crime that he steeled it because I don’t think that the old lady even knew that there were some cameras in her apartment. This “crime” led Auggie to his long time hobby: Every morning at precise 8:00 he photographs his store, from across the street. His idea with this is that he wants to capture that exact place, his place, forever.