Hjælp - engelsk

hej

jeg er ny herinde, og fik anbelfalet siden qaf en veninde som sagde der var mange hjælpsomme folk herinde :)

jeg er meget usikker i engelsk, da jeg virkelig ikke er sproglig. Derfor ville jeg høre om der var nogen der ville kigge min tekst igennem og se om i kan finde lidt fejl, synes nemlig ikke dert lyder korrekt men kan bare ikke selv finde ud af hvad der er galt, især første afsnit - Evidence for natural selection synes jeg virker rodet

på forhånd tak for hjælpen

1. I have chosen to write a summary of Survival of the fittest - page 5 and 6

Evidence for natural selection
one of the reasons why the theory of evolution was still only a theory because it is such a lengthy process. Therefore, only rapid changes in species have been observed. One of the species is peppered moth, in the beginning was the most peppered moth were of the pale variety. This was an advantage because they could be camouflaged, while the moth with the black color was eaten. This made the white variety a greater propensity to survive.

Antibiotic-resistant bacteria
Microorganisms multiply rapidly, therefore they can develop in a relatively short time. Occasionally there is a mutation of the bacteria that makes the example that they may become resistant to an antibiotic

Darwin’s theory
Charles Darwin was an English naturalist who studied variation in plants and animals during a five-year voyage around the world.
He explains the key elements of his theory, which has given a lot of discussion, as it has been in conflict with religious views.

Lamarck's theory
Lamarck developed also a theory of evolution, however, Lamarck's theory was eventually discredited Because acquired characteristics do not have a genetic basis

2.
I have chosen to write about my views about Darwin.
It is too difficult for me to say what will happen to the human race in the future, because it depends on so much, but I have a few theories.

If we do not stop this global warming, which gives climate change in the longer term, I think it may have an impact if bright people coming to live in strong sunlight, as it gives increased risk of skin cancer, and vice versa, with dark-skinned people there will be a shortage of vitamin D. If this happens, I think clearly that the human body over several years will adapt to climate change.

I've also been thinking in completely different orbits. We as humans have developed our knowledge quite extreme, maybe we get so much knowledge that we, with our technology makes evolution becomes out of force. If this will happen, the technology will be the determining factor for how we will develop our future. This, I think in the longer term could be dangerous because they alter the natural selection.

One of the things that I think is important to think about when you talk about Darwinism and the Christian creation myth is that we will be unable to obtain certain knowledge about whether god exists or not.

Some places are not taught Darwinism as this is against the Christian creation myth. This I think is not correct to do, because I think the young people themselves must have an attitude about it was God who created everything, or whether it happened through a natural selection. I therefore think it would only be fair if young people were trained in both things the way they can even take a position on the subject and create their own views about the subject.