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Fra Datid til nutid ?

10. maj 2010 af 215 (Slettet)

Nogen som ville se om i kan spotte nogle ord som jeg glemt at ændre fra datid til nutid

Some clubwomen sits to the side of the far doorway singing people in as they enter the assembly hall, where a game is already in progress , the numbers are being called by a woman who stand on the stage. The packers hurry to their regular table . But a young couple occupies the Packers ‘ usual place. The girl wears denims, and so does the long-hair man with her. She had rings and bracelets and earrings that made her shiny in the milky light . Just as the Packers came up, the girl turns to the follow with her and pokes her finger at a number on his card. Then she pinches his arm. 


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Svar #1
10. maj 2010 af rakijovic

Kongruensfejl i sits og stand.

Du har i det efterfølgende overset had, made og came.

Tegnsætningen og ordvalget er lidt spøjse nogle steder; er du sikker på du har skrevet teksten af ordret?

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Svar #2
10. maj 2010 af 215 (Slettet)

originale vedlagt 

Vedhæftet fil:Ny side.pdf

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Svar #3
10. maj 2010 af rakijovic

Ja, jeg mente nok at det var gået lidt hurtigt for dit vedkommende. Nedenstående er den korrekte version, inklusive rettelser. Husk at være mere opmærksom næste gang du gengiver væsentlig opgavetekst. ;)

Some clubwomen sit to the side of the far doorway signing people in as they enter the assembly hall, where a game is already in progress, the numbers being called by a woman who stands on the stage. The Packers hurry to their regular table. But a young couple occupies the Packers‘ usual place. The girl wears denims, and so does the long-haired man with her. She has rings and bracelets and earrings that make her shiny in the milky light. Just as the Packers come up, the girl turns to the fellow with her and pokes her finger at a number on his card. Then she pinches his arm.

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Vriendelikheid is net sinisme wat 'n jol gekry het! ◄ |||| ► Ljubaznost je samo cinizam što je dobio piće! ◄ ||||

► Prietenia este doar cinism care a băut puțin alcool ! 


Svar #4
10. maj 2010 af 215 (Slettet)

kunne du lige se min stil, og se hvilke fejl jeg skal få rettet.. ?


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