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Jeg har rettet nogle fejl (nok ikke det hele):

What do you think about the Rolling Stones concert?
“The only thing I remember from the sixties is The Event of The Rolling Stones concert in Hyde Park. I was a big Rolling Stones fan and I still am. The concert in Hyde Park is the biggest experience in my life. I feel so lucky when I recall the concert.  It is the biggest concert I have seen in my life. And member Brian Jones (sacked for his excessive drug abuse) two days earlier was found dead in his swimming pool, so the concert has quickly changed the status of the concert to a “memory full concert”. I was so happy to see them. It’s a big thing for me, and I think the Rolling Stones concert is a big\important thing in the music history. And the death of Brian Jones touches me deeply. Every time I think back (er ikke sikker på man kan bruge det udtryk) I remember real music with opinion.” (hvad skal sætningen betyde? er det musik med "mening"?)
• What about the mood?
“The mood was really festive. People were happy and felt comfortable. There was about ½ million people. There were all kind of people; children in carpets, hippies, rockers and many girls screaming of course. The security was Hells Angels. So if you didn’t behave yourself you could be shot in the head. It was an ultra hard and dangerous security. “
 

Det er ikke så godt at starte en sætning med "and", så er det bedre at omformulere sætningen... :)

hov forresten: all kinds of people

Tusind tak for din hjælp ;o)! 

 Hvis sætningerne: people were happy and felt comfortable og There were all kind of  people. Skal there was about ½ million people, så ikke også skrives med were?

Jo, det har du helt ret i :)