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fejl, fejl og fejl

12. januar 2011 af peoplewant (Slettet)

Hej allesammen , ville i ikke tjekke mine fejl, og give jeres mening.

In the evening there’s a party at Cameron’s house down by the beach, everyone is
expecting Derek to show up. Derek is like a good in the environment off the Nazis. But in the
meantime while he was in prison, he is not a Nazi anymore. But he is the only one who knows that.
He shows up at the party. He visits Cameron. But he punches him in the face. He leaves the room.
Outside the finds out that he knocked opt Cameron. Then Seth drags his gun, and threatens Derek.
Derek gets away. Now the Nazi-gang is after Derek. He managed to convince Danny that being a
Nazi isn’t a live worthy for them. One day the police contacts Derek. They ask Derek if he wants to
join the Nazis again, to do an inside job for them, he doesn’t really have a choice.


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Svar #1
12. januar 2011 af khemisto (Slettet)

In the evening there is a party at Cameron’s house down by the beach. Everyone is
expecting Derek to show up. Derek was like a god in the Nazi environment. But while Derek was in prison he changed. He was not a nazi anymore. But he is the only one who knows that.
 

Det er hvad jeg har fået rettet indtil videre.
 


Svar #2
12. januar 2011 af peoplewant (Slettet)

mange tak:-)


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