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The English actor Daniel Radcliffe is a grownup. The young man, who made his debut like as a 12 year-old in the first Harry Potter movie, is today 19 years old and working like as a movie and theatre actor. Since that his debut he had has played the title role in other 5 other movies about the magician Harry, and he had has also had smaller parts in other several other movies.

Lately he had has performed in a very commend (commanding?) theatre play ”Equus”, where in which he plaid played the main character as a violent and unstable young man.

 Denne her rettelse forstår jeg ikke rigtig

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"and he has also had smaller parts in other several other movies." 

#2

Jeg brugte førnutid af verbet. He has had .

 Der skal vidst være bindestreg mellem alle de der med year-old, så det skal være 12-year-old, og 19-year-old

Nej, i det her tilfælde skal der ikke være bindestreg imellem. Det er kun hvis der f.eks. står: a 12-year-old (boy), er jeg næsten sikker på.

 "in the first Harry Potter movie, is today 19 years old and working like as a movie and theatre actor." 

- Skal der stå "as a", fordi det er nutid? Eller er det pga. at det fører tilbage til Harry?

Min ærede medkontributør Alberte94 (#5) har fuldstændig ret.

#6:

Nej, det har ikke en Søren med præsens (nutid) at gøre. Derimod har det meget at gøre med at "like" i denne kontekst betyder "lige præcis som", hvorimod "as" i denne kontekst betyder "som <-> i egenskab af'.