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Mostly in my free time, I do my homework, but that is just so I have time to hang out with my friends and family. In my family, we always have a tradition with eating dinner together. From my perspective, I think that it’s nice to have a family meeting every evening. We do also have other traditions. Personally, my favorite is our Christmas tradition. We gather our closest members of the family every Sunday for playing games, eating at dinner and just telling each other that we love and appreciate them. I couldn’t see why that wasn’t going to be my favorite one.
When I go hang out with my friends, witch by the way are very importing to me, we always go shopping or sunbathing. They are so importing to me, because those friends that I have now, have been my friends since kindergarten, and they have always been by my side in everything.
Svar #1
18. juni 2014 af OnceUponATime
tradition of eating
for game playing/ to play games
eating dinner
love and appreciate one another
hang out with my friends, who...
through everything
Svar #8
18. juni 2014 af rakijovic
There's room for improvement, ladies.
Mostly in my free time [sic] I do my homework – when else are you supposed to do them?
it's always an tradition – hence the term, *cough*, tradition (moreover, it's tradition to eat dinner ...)
we do also have -- no need for the reinforcing do
favorite is chiefly AmE, favourite is chiefly BrE. It's up to you which variant of English you wish to use. Consistency is always nice.
each other instead of them
which and witch do not mean the same. Learn the difference fast, lest you want to kill the mood at the next family hoo-ha.
they are so importing to me -- well, anybody can get into business these days, it seems. Learn the difference between important, imported and importing (and to spare you from future sexual embarassment, let's throw in impotent as well). No, they're not pronounced the same (well, in Dænmag dæj aë, it wåd sim...)
Other than that, your piece is tolerable.
► Vriendelikheid is net sinisme wat 'n jol gekry het! ◄ |||| ► Ljubaznost je samo cinizam što je dobio piće! ◄ ||||
► Prietenia este doar cinism care a băut puțin alcool ! ◄
Svar #9
18. juni 2014 af OnceUponATime
#8 Haha, det der er seriøst nogle af de sjoveste rettelser jeg har læst xD
Svar #11
18. juni 2014 af OnceUponATime
Kan man ikk ligeledes sige "eating dinner"?
Svar #12
18. juni 2014 af Stygotius
hmm jo, det kan man, men det er ikke almindeligt hvis man da kke vil understrege selve spiseprocessen, men blot udtrykke at man indtager et måltid.
Hvad jeg undrer mig over ? -det er brugen af "seriøst" i denne sammenhæng. Det er barnligt fritidsklubsprog, -en pjattet og krukket efterabning af engelsk.
Svar #13
18. juni 2014 af OnceUponATime
Men tak for forklaringen :)
Svar #14
18. juni 2014 af Stygotius
Det er ikke noget jeg synes; det er et faktum, men du kan da godt snakke dit pubertetssprog hvis du synes det er forfærdelig dødsmart.
Svar #15
18. juni 2014 af OnceUponATime
#14 Hahaha, det er helt i orden! Din mening er velkommen! :D Tak skal du have for input, men jeg vidste ikke, at "seriøst" i denne sammenhæng blev klassificeret som fritidsklubsprog, haha :D Du vil da ikke mene, at der noget galt med fritidsklubber, ville du nu det Stygotius? Det ville ellers være ærgeligt..
Svar #16
18. juni 2014 af Stygotius
Næh, men hvis du er 17 år, skulle du nok være kommet over de fleste småbørnsvaner.
Du kunne jo begynde med at finde ud af hvad "seriøs" betyder -på dansk.
Svar #17
19. juni 2014 af OnceUponATime
Men jeg er glad for at du bekymrer dig for unges sproglige adfærd; dette viser at du arbejder på at forbedre ungdommen nu til dags, hvis man kan udtrykke sig sådan.. Og det er i alt fald formidabelt af dig! :)
Svar #18
19. juni 2014 af rakijovic
"Tak for rådet, men jeg tror nu ikke, at jeg deler helt samme holdning som dig, og det ser ud til, at det samme gælder vores viden "
Undskyld; hvád?
► Vriendelikheid is net sinisme wat 'n jol gekry het! ◄ |||| ► Ljubaznost je samo cinizam što je dobio piće! ◄ ||||
► Prietenia este doar cinism care a băut puțin alcool ! ◄
Svar #19
19. juni 2014 af OnceUponATime