fra datid til nutid

keeps, walks away, cannot understand, leaves, uses, carries, cover, is happening

og det følgende?

"The following morning I told my sister that I must go away. She wept bitterly. She held me to her bosom and I let her hot tears flow on to my head. Tears ran down my face.  When both of us had no more tears to shed she told me yes, I could go. She said she did not want to see me suffer. I knew she did not want me to see her suffer."

I tell, she weeps, she holds, I let, tears flow, tears run, both of us have, she tells, I can go, she says, she does, she doesn't want to, I know,

My sister’s husband keeps quiet and his father walks away mumbling something I cannot understand. As soon as he leaves Ole Sirayo uses all his muscle to lift my sister out of bed and carries her to his bed. I cover my head not to see what is happening.
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The following morning I tell my sister that I must go away. She weeps bitterly. She holds me to her bosom and I let her hot tears flow on to my head. Tears run down my face.  When both of us have no more tears to shed she tells me yes, I can go. She says she does not want to see me suffer. I know she did not want me to see her suffer.

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Sådan? er det rigtigt?

Fint,

Hvad svært er der i at skrive nutid i stedet for datid uden at andre skal gøre det for en???

Skal man have alt sit hjemmearbejde lavet af andre??